Passion
Poem by: Writing_wall44
Slowly I became so bare
Standing in front of you-so vulnerable
I wanted you to say something
Maybe tell me I was perfect
But instead you came and wrapped your arms around me
You whispered sweet loves in my ear
Before I knew it you were as bare as me
We kissed for what seemed an eternity
I wish it never stopped
Your body so close to me
I wanted you closer
And finally you were
All night it was perfect and great
I didn't want it to end
I didn't want you to leave
So we cuddled together and laid together
No one would ever be able to deny the sweet passion between you and I.
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A lovely simple poem of mutual attraction.I liked it
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Why, thank you!
Feels like a dedication.
I like the initial emphasis on vulnerability. There is something about that which is aphroditic. The general theme here is 'no regrets'
I like the lines "I wanted you closer, and finally, you were"....very nice subtle inference.
It's sweet and reassuring with a sense of conquest in the last line, not over each other but over the world and its expectations. I caught the rhyme as well...
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Thank you!!!! :D
Sweet and tender, very feminine, loved it.
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Thank you!
masterjack