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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Adult Romance  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Slowly I became so bare

Standing in front of you-so vulnerable

I wanted you to say something

Maybe tell me I was perfect

But instead you came and wrapped your arms around me

You whispered sweet loves in my ear

Before I knew it you were as bare as me

We kissed for what seemed an eternity

I wish it never stopped

Your body so close to me

I wanted you closer

And finally you were

All night it was perfect and great

I didn't want it to end

I didn't want you to leave

So we cuddled together and laid together

No one would ever be able to deny the sweet passion between you and I.

Submitted: July 26, 2017

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Feels like a dedication.
I like the initial emphasis on vulnerability. There is something about that which is aphroditic. The general theme here is 'no regrets'
I like the lines "I wanted you closer, and finally, you were"....very nice subtle inference.
It's sweet and reassuring with a sense of conquest in the last line, not over each other but over the world and its expectations. I caught the rhyme as well...

Sun, June 14th, 2020 11:21pm


Thank you!!!! :D

Sun, June 14th, 2020 5:06pm


Sweet and tender, very feminine, loved it.

Wed, July 8th, 2020 10:13pm


Thank you!

Wed, July 8th, 2020 3:16pm

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