On the morning of November 3, 2009 I woke up and got out of my bed. Smiling softly I remebered that it was my Birthday. My smile getting bigger I rememberd that means I could finally go to the BDSM club down the block from my apartment. I have lived on my own since I was legaly emancipated at age 15. Becoming giddy I quickly ran to my bathroom stripped my clothing and tuned on the water, steping in I sighed sofly as the water slowly heated up and cascaded down my body. I washed my hair and then carefully washed my body, I shaved my vagina, legs and arm pits. Once that was done I got out of the shower and dried off. I went to the mirror and looks at my naked form.
Standing at about 5 foot 2 I am not the tallest girl around, but my other features make up for it. I lighty trailed my fingers down my nice breasts. I am a 34 c-cup in bra size. I lighty ran my hands down my flat and toned stomach, going to the gym on a daily basies keeps a girl looking good. I weigh in around 110 pounds, a little under weight according to my doctor but I am healthy as a horse other than that. My skin is a pale white, and silky smooth. Running a brush through my long, silky black hair that nearly reaches my ass I looked at my vibrant blue eyes. I love looking at myself in the mirror though I picture what will happen to me when I am disciplined if my Master decides to punish me, when I find Him that is. Finishing with the brush i decided to curl it after blowdrying it. Once that was done I didn't bother with makeup just ran to my closet and put on my black corset top and a thong. Once that was on I put on my leather coat that comes down to my knees, no reason for my neighbors to figure out where I am going this evening. Slipping on a pair of shoes that will be easy to remove I walked out of my apartment, my list of limits in hand and locked up the appartment.
Once I was outside the apartment complex I smiled as I walked to the club, The Lair, once inside I went to the first person I saw. "Excuse me Sir, but this is my first time here, is there anything i must do before going into the dungeon area?" I asked shyly, not meeting His eyes, just to be safe.
"Coat off, shoes inside coat pocket and then hang it up, I'm guessing your a submissive, so you will wear this silver band anytime you are here." He replied.
"Yes Sir" I replied and quickly did as asked and then put the silver band on. He nodded to me and pointed to the door. When I went in I gasped, it was amazing, there were toys, spanking horses, dildos, whips, crops, wax play stations, and even watersports play areas. I saw Doms and Domme's of all shapes and sizes, and in all different apparal, most of them however had on some sort of Latex or leather outfit. Subs, puppy boys and girls, slaves and even a pony girl were all kneeling or in a scene with his or her Master or Mistress. I felt as if I was in hevan, as I took everything in I didnt realize I was walking straight for someone, when I ran into them I gasped. I looked up, making sure not to meet their eyes and noticed no band, then noticed it was a Her. "i am sooo sorry Ma'am! please forgive me." I begged.
"Are you new here girl?" she asked, giving me a stern look, her arms crossed. I chanced a look at her eyes and noticed they were hazel, she had long curly brown hair and a very sexy Latex number.
"Yes Ma'am." I replied softly.
"I am Madame Kathrine, the owner of this club, take care to watch where you are going girl!" she all but yelled at me.
"Yes Madame." I replied looking down.
After she walked off I let out a small sigh of relief, I noticed a few girls kneeling in the corner on some cousions so I walked over and noticed a sign above their head that read 'Unowned Sluts' I knelt on an empty pillow and said nothing, hoping a Dom or Domme might aporach me, I had slipped my limit list into my corset, not sure if I would even need it tonight or not I decided not to take it out unless I was asked for my limits. "Oh my gosh!" one of the girls whispered.
I looked over to see what she was galking at and noticed the most handsome man. He had sleek long black hair that came just past his shoulders, he had bright green eyes, though you could tell just by looking at His eyes that He meant busniess. He was not wearing a shirt and leather pants, he was highly defined and toned. I quietly asked "Who is that?"
"THAT is Master Demetri! He comes here every other night from what I hear, looking for the perfect girl, but He has never taken one. Which is odd because any girl who is trainined would be perfect for Him." one of the others replied.
"Maybe He wants to train someone who is brand new?" I replied as more of a question, all I got in response were laughs and snorts. I watched Master Demetri until it was time for the club to close and as I put my coat on I heard a soft, yet strict voice tell me to stop. I froze in my spot and slolwy turned around to come face to face with Master Demetri.
"H-hello S-s-Sir" I stuttered, He just looked at me for a moment before walking off with a nod towards Madame
Kathrine, who I just noticed was standing by the door.
"Goodbye Madame, I will be returning to your lovley astablishment" I said softly as I walked to the door.
She nodded and dismissed me with the wave of her hand. I walked back to my apartment and went to the bathroom to shower, again, and change. Once I was in my pajamas I crawled into the bed and fell asleep dreaming of Master Demetri.
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This was awesome!
I loved the writing voice. It sounds like a young, smart, and elegant girl. For example, how she wakes up and softly smiles. It's a very feminine way.
It is great how she is knowing about all the rules of the dungeon, like avoiding eye contact. The fantasy world, were girls are waiting on a pillow to be taken is wonderful. It is wonderful to get into that world, where they observe and yearn after different masters and mistresses.
There were a few typos.
'astablishment' in second to last paragraph.
'basies' in second paragraph.
'i' not capitalized in third paragraph.
'hevan' somewhere in the middle.
There are more.
Cowboy109- thanks so much for your kind words, and I typed this out when I was half asleep and didn't spell check it, I was on the road all day long earlier on the 26th, anyway thanks once again for your kind words! I do hope you will continue to read this story as I update it!
Anonymous
it is amazing story and i do agree with Cowboy109 some writers lack catching the readers straight away i find on her but you have done that perfectly allthough i cant really say much but well done hope it carrys on soon as ill b waiting lol x
Interesting main character and cool concept. It was kind of a slow start, but that gave us time to meet your characters.
Anonymous
She seems so nice and shy and I like that about a character.KMU?
:))
~Kat
Quite a captivating story! Are you still writing?
An interesting opening, enjoyable reading. When will be next chapter?
Anonymous
Please do try and continue this story x)
It's really well written and I am very interested in the beginning.
Will you please TRY and write more?
Thanks n_n
- Your eternal fan
*smiles* I have been in the middle of a large move as well as dealing with finding out I was adopted. I will be getting back to writing as soon as i possiably can, as of right now I am also seeking a job so that I can get my own place, but once I am settled in a schedule I will write the next chapter. Thank you for you comment *smiles*
cowboy109