you = me.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

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http://www.booksie.com/thrillers/poetry/irene_orton/n0n3xistent/chapter/1


Submitted: August 03, 2009

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Love Reaper

Brilliant is all I can say =]

Mon, August 3rd, 2009 6:27pm

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I'm flattered.

Mon, August 3rd, 2009 12:44pm

Snow412

We seek to do things for the better...just to make them worse. Fighting against the curren, so to speak.

I understand the fight within; lashing out at myself, yet trying to stand strong.

Interesting piece here.

Tue, August 4th, 2009 8:34pm

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the general enigma, the crucial, implausible paradox of the given condition is the fact that is beyond my character's understanding, which is the infant outrage, the full-fledged initial (and I stress the word, initial) impossibility of the attempt itself.
how could someone so rigid (and again, the word is slightly stressed) consider himself a victim of a disastrous venture?
he never intended to 'stand strong or lash at himself'...
then again, if you feel like discussing or even parsing this poignant piece of work - I'm ready and willing.
apart from that, I really appreciate your review of it.

Tue, August 4th, 2009 4:15pm

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