Your touch,
Is my body's desire.
Your touch,
Is the one I sire.
Your lips are like fire,
The one's my mouth encounters.
Your eye's are a mirror,
That see through my fearer.
Your arm's keep me safe and warm,
Then you whisper I'm your's.
Your smile,
Makes me shiver to my core.
You say I'm the one you adore.
Your all I want,
Your all I need.
You say I feel like a dream.
Your love is my gift from heaven,
You say my body is your heaven.
Your the light,
I'm the darkness.
But together we become the brightness.
Your the one that turns my wrong's
To right.
You whisper everything's alright.
My love isn't perfect,
But you say our love is certain.
We hump, we tumble,
Baby I'm so ready to rumble.
The gentle caress of your finger's,
The one's that always linger.
I'm so ready for you to take me,
But you want to break me.
You whisper in my ear,
Your all I want to hear.
You circle down my clit,
You put a finger in my juicy slit.
You gently rub and rub,
My already swollen nub.
You slowly make me reach my peak,
You have already made me weak.
You smile at my trembling body.
The look you have is oh so naughty.
I take a much needed breath.
As you sigh in appreciation.
I moan I'm so ready,
You say yes baby.
Your tip in my slit.
I love the way you rub my clit.
You slowly push into me,
Your cock already feeling me.
You look into my eye's,
I love that twinkle in your eye's .
Baby I'm on cloud nine,
You whisper let's do the sixty-nine.
Your rocking in and out,
I'm so ready to shout.
You chuckle at my pleasure,
Your cock is really my treasure.
You turn me on my belly,
My legs feel like jelly.
I'm on the brink,
You whisper it's my kink.
You slap my ass,
The feeling is almost my crash.
I'm going to come,
You say it's okay let it come.
I reached my climax,
I felt your seed.
We sigh in relief,
This feeling beyond belief.
We just made love,
I feel so in love.
The first of many,
Baby your more than plenty.
You whisper amazing,
I say your crazy.
Your the first I made love too,
You say I love you.
I smile in disbelief,
You say I'm your relief.
The thought of you is so erotic,
You whisper I'm hypnotic.
I agree we're ment to be,
You whisper will always be.
A/N: For those who don't comment and like I know some of it is a little off but don't judge. I love it and if you don't then too freaking bad but that's really sad. Anyway and for those that do like and comment thank you in advance for reading and commenting. I always love to hear from reader's or other author's. Thank you and much love.
Submitted: July 03, 2014
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Don't worry about people not commenting or liking, those that do appreciate the work you put in to create stories and poems like this. For what it's worth I felt this was very true to life and captured what being with someone you care about is like. It's not always gentle or "lovemaking" but there is always a connection and there is always the knowledge of how to please your partner alone. Good job!
Thu, July 3rd, 2014 9:47pm
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Thank you, I can't explain how much it means to me. I take great pride in my writing especially my poems because they reflect my feelings as well. People may take offense but I really don't give a damn. They can trash it all they want but I still love it. Thank you for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it. Much love.
Thu, July 3rd, 2014 3:58pm
I felt this poem. I fucking felt it. Om my god I loved it and I don't think it needs too much work. But it definitely made me think of Stefan for some reason lol. And I wonder if your husband inspire these type of poems in you.
Also, as a closing for those who may criticize, all I will tell you is that you need to tell them to go fuck themselves. People will always have something to say but you gotta ignore because who gives a fuck what they have to say?
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Good I'm glad you felt it. I was hoping someone would. It's a crazy thing that you thought of Stefan with this poem because the whole time I was writing it out I was thinking of Lucas and Payton. Why I have no clue. But I swear that I was. Anyway I totally get it people can just go fuck themselves. I loved this poem because it did have some hidden meanings that yes my hubby does inspire and I guess we could call him my muse. Lol I felt like if it was too deep. Way too intimidating I don't know but yeah well I'm honored that you felt it. I freaking love you much love.
Thu, July 3rd, 2014 4:06pm
Girl, I loved it! I usually hate poems, but you 'Spyguy's' poems are the only ones that I like. Anyway, great writing, as always, keep up the good work, girl!
Fri, July 4th, 2014 12:53pm
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Thank you, I really appreciate that Jay. Comments like this are only adding to my growing ego. Lol anyway much love.
Fri, July 4th, 2014 6:06am
its so erotic I'm about to explode. I love it so good I'm finishing chapter 9 soon yay love itttt!!!!!
Fri, July 4th, 2014 7:32pm
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Thank you, Im glad you enjoyed it.
Fri, July 4th, 2014 1:27pm
This was very sweet, very moving & almost perfect... If you want to fix some of the little minor bumps, I'd be happy to help you with gramatical tweaks... I really think you have some major talent... When I said; "The Garden of my Mind". I meant my collection of written works... I believe you would like at least something of my works... Thank you for your comments.
Wed, July 9th, 2014 7:43am
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Thank you, your comments are always oh so sweet. I think I have read a few of your pieces. Of course it doesn't let me commen. on most of them. But you really have a way with words and imagination. Thank you, for reading and commenting.
Wed, July 9th, 2014 6:50am
How romantic. Reminds me of an ex. God knows why not my last ex.
Tue, July 22nd, 2014 10:53pm
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Thanks, I appreciate that. Who knows though you may run into her one day.
Tue, July 22nd, 2014 4:10pm
You have some serious erotic vibrations going on, girl.
I'm a fan of erotic poetry and there aren't many people who do it, so thanks for this. I honestly had no idea this was on the site. I was just looking at your portfolio and was so excited to see you write poems! (along with liking vampires)
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This was written along time but thank you so much for reading my stuff! ??
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Nothing like passion between two lovers, when I read this it sort of fits either a newly wed couple or a couple celebrating fifty years that took care of each other most of their lives. love it :D
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Thank you, I really appreciate the feed back and the postitive reviews.
Thu, July 3rd, 2014 10:24amOther people may take offense but love is like that especially young love when you just can't get enough of each other. And I felt that when my hubby n I first started dating and that feeling just hasn't gone away. Thank you for reading and commenting it makes me feel good. ;-)