Touch my body!
Touch my body, I say.
You whisper all day.
Touch my body, I beg.
You whisper tell me again.
Touch my body, I plead.
You say in each and every way.
Touch my body, I say.
You whisper touch you where?
Touch my body, I beg.
Then you gently cup my breasts.
Touch my body, I plead.
You finger goes down my slit.
Touch my body, I say.
Then you rub my clit.
Touch my body, I beg.
You push me down the bed.
Touch my body, I plead.
You gently thrust your massive head.
Touch my body, I say.
Your cock is finally in.
Touch my body, I beg.
You gently thrust over and over again.
Touch my body, I plead.
You whisper all night long bay bay.
Submitted: July 25, 2014
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It's sexy as hell! I love it. You make some awesome eroticas. I hope you don't stop.
Fri, July 25th, 2014 11:50pm
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I actually don't mean for them to come out that way. It just does lol I have no idea why, but thank you for reading all my crap means a lot to me.
Fri, July 25th, 2014 4:57pm
NICE. Well done.
Wed, July 30th, 2014 3:56am
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Thank you, as always for reading and commenting. Much love.
Tue, July 29th, 2014 9:02pm
Good one.
Thu, July 31st, 2014 7:02am
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Thank you!
Thu, July 31st, 2014 8:51am
Very good, love the repetition, really rams home the intensity! ;)
Fri, August 1st, 2014 8:54am
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Thank you very much. Hope to hear back from you more often. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Fri, August 1st, 2014 9:42am
heh this is cute :) honestly not my thing, but I admit that it is very cute written.
Mon, September 15th, 2014 6:54pm
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Thank you, I appreciate the comment. Thank you for taking the time to read my things enjoy!
Mon, September 15th, 2014 12:27pm
No problem! :) You're the person I usually I see in the comments of other writers I admire you, you seem like you've read the whole site. -_*
Mon, September 15th, 2014 7:49pm
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I read a lot yes. I've read so much on here that you can honestly. I've been around. I know what I like and I stick to it so yes please ccontinue showering me with comments I love and appreciate them whole heartedly. Much love and read whatever catches your attention.
Mon, September 15th, 2014 1:55pm
Hot!!
Sun, April 12th, 2015 2:14pm
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That was the whole point. I'm glad you found it hot!!!
Sun, April 12th, 2015 8:59pm
Found another. When I start a novel I have to have the time to read through at least a couple of chapters at a time. Going to be tough this week (hubby having minor surgery on Thursday, then we are going out of town.) Your poems are filling the eagerness I have for reading your works also. So erotically beautiful.
Tue, April 14th, 2015 12:14am
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Thank you that means so much to me. I hope all goes well with your hubby sending prayers his way. Thank you for taking the time to read my writing and commenting on it, it's very much appreciated! Much Love Aly!!!
Mon, April 13th, 2015 8:56pm
Woohoo! I felt the eagerness along those lines! So sexy! I beg to say, you did a great job here! :-)
Mon, April 20th, 2015 6:56am
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. ????
Mon, April 20th, 2015 10:43am
Though you use rhyme in your poem, the predominant poetic element here is repetition.
Very erotic piece, intensely passionate.
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Thank you! It’s not everyone’s cup of tea but I write the way it flows in my head. Sometimes it rhythms and sometimes it doesn’t. Like the says says flow is flow. Thank you for reading. It’s been a long time since I’ve caught someone’s attention.
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Jesus, that was fucking hot!!!!
Fri, July 25th, 2014 5:37pmAuthor
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Oh princess, not as hot as you make it seem lol. But thank you! Its spicy enough.
Fri, July 25th, 2014 10:42amI love you!