I danced my finger tips on the key board. Long dark red nails shined back at me as I scanned through my inbox.
"Horny. Could use some help."
Nope.
"Sexy, do you trade nudes?xx"
Trade? No. My frustration started to build up. Looked like there won't be a single guy worth playing with tonight.
* * *
5'5, 18, virgin, these words didn't define me. "Broken heart, need a nice man to talk to and spank me at night." I had under my profile, " Preferably masculine, experienced with slutty mistress. Talk dirty to me but I won't listen."
This, is our secret. I'm Nikky. Call me catfish if you want, but hell, there ain't no nice men on this site. I know it. They know it. Either they were looking for one night stand, or just too odd to have a girlfriend. And I? Need some spice in life.
* * *
"Wanna have some dirty fun?" No
"Wanna rate my dick?" Um no. You would know if your cock is 10/10.
"Hey. What's up?! I'm bored."
Yeah right, I rolled my eyes.
"Entertain me? Why no reply? Answer me. Did I do wrong? What do you need, bitch?"
I blocked him before he could say more.
"Broken? I'm here to heal you;)"
"Haha what a pick up line!"
"No really, what's wrong? I'm here to help."
I didn't need another therapist, bored enough.
* * *
As I scrolled down my inbox of all the hey, hi, and what's ups, I saw this:
"Listen, it won't be long till you moan in to my ear, hands cuffed, hair gripped in my hands, begging to be taken, so why waste time with all the other guys?"
"Excuse me?"
"Oh a toughie, I like it."
"Horny guy."
"Won't deny. It's late baby."
"Don't expect any help from me."
"I didn't. Just chatting."
"Who is this?"
"Chris, your fantasy."
"We'll have to see about that."
"You are interested, so far."
"I will give you a chance. Send something sexy."
"Well, all I have gotten is your face on the profile. Intriguing for sure, from the strength of your eyes to these full pumped lips, but..."
"Yes?"
"Someone is hiding something"
I won't agree exactly. Gym was my life besides school and a broken family. I was extremely isolated in high school because I never bothered to chime in. School was just not my place to just be. The
idea of being there was enough, last year in high school though, hanging in there.
My body was a whole other story, an arrowed heart tattoo on my wrist, piercing on the belly button, mid line down to my toned core, long legs, small breasts so sensitive that swimming in the ocean
hurt my nipples.
I hid my past, my story, but not my body.
"Earn it." I finally replied. "Trust me, it's worth the wait." For a teaser, I sent him a picture of a selfie naked under boy's t shirt, exposing my lean legs, soft smooth skin and nipples peeking
out.
"Not surprised." He said which angered me. I didn't think I could work harder for this body and that was all he gave me, followed by a picture of some random model
"Where did you get that photo, off Google?"
"Lol, same question back to you. Catfish."
"Don't bother talking to me then." This man did not have the basic trust I thought I had earned. I was so wrong about him.
"Haha chill, little kitty. You really want to see me? Don't fall in love yet."
"Lol, never."
I held my breath, praying for someone decent looking and trust worthy. Most guys up here were either horny and needed a hand or just too odd to maintain a conversation.
First look at him, my heart almost skipped a beat, full beard neatly shaved, black wavy hair, grey eye piercing through me with such roughness. I was a sucker for beautiful faces and his suited my
preference. What was he doing her?
"Would that do for you?"
I was still admiring his picture after he sent another. Defined abs, strong torso, veins popping from his forearms that I suspected we shared the same craziness in the gym.
* * *
Before I could reply, a message popped up from James.
"Baby, I miss you, haven't heard from you in a while. You know he misses you too, your sweet lil delish."
James was an older man in his thirties, divorced. I know, a bit disturbing if you really thought about it. He had a daughter that was one year older than me. And when I tried to call him daddy
once, it completely creeped him out.
Played football in college, well built till this day, he had never forgotten to send me a picture before he hopped naked into the pool.
"Nik, Have you been playing her without me again? Not fair, I always show you everything."
Oh shit, this is about to go down, so I typed: "Babe, I dreamed about you last night, very hot and steamy. Woke up with a mess! Just got wet thinking about it." That was a complete lie.
"You did?! Well I dreamed about us cuddling at this fire place up on the mountains, my cock in your bun cheeks. Then you straddled on top of me, flame blazing through your thigh gap, under your
gorgeous lips. My balls were slapping your ass, juices dripping off..."
Ok... that was hot for sure but not exactly what I wanted. "Oh Shut up James, or I'm gonna have wet dreams again."
"Haha, wet dreams are my fave. I have been dreaming of you every night."
"No you didn't!"
"Yes, I did, shower sex, pool sex, in theater, on the train, against the window... Do i need to go on?"
This was James. He kept overwhelming me with too much, but sometimes exactly what I needed after a breakdown. But recently, I just wanted some distance. I felt disgusted with myself, for pretending
and manipulating, for using him and toying with his heart. But then once again, I did what I had to do in this ruthless world. I could feel my heart harden in every seconds and go cold.
Finally, I typed back: "Go on, I need it for my late sess tonight. I am gonna take your suggestion and use a cucumber as a dildo. We'll see how it goes." Then I added, "Give me
some space now so I could get some work done." Without looking, I know he would blow me a kiss, before he type detailed paragraphs for me to view later.
I just checked, it was three kissing emojis and two paragraphs of doggy style ass fuck.
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Nikky,
So what's the significance of 'Catfish'? Just curious...
I think the 'online love craze' is pretty fascinating. You don't have to say much in a story about risk and danger...everybody is keenly aware already. Strangers in the dark, really. So, Catfish is playing with fire. Parents warn their kids about this stuff. So does the media. Dr. Phil is right in there. It makes for a great story, though. The last line here is pretty scary. I'm not computer savvy, but I do know that some people can do some amazing things with a computer. They can find out a lot just from an email.
So, I haven't read ahead, and I don't know where you're going. But I know you have a lot of options that might turn out to be more than Catfish had in mind. I like 'dirty talk', by the way. Your title got me interested in your story.
Hey Gone Girl!!
I am so happy you replied, because you sounded like a professional writer with skills!
So yes, regarding to the 'catfish' you will see more of what she does and doesn't do. The story is not yet fully developed at this point, and you will see more characters of catfish in later chapters.
Your suggestions are very valuable to me because you made some really good points. I will definitely go back and make some revisions after my story has a better structure.
Thank you so much !!! And keep reading! I want to know what you think !
Best,
Nikky
Online conversation and relationships like this are aplenty on most sites. But it would be interesting to see where you will go from here with this.
Hot! But sooo cold, with the lack of a touch of human kindness! As human beings, we need not just words, but actions my new friend! I'm sure your heart would agree! I'll read on to find out what future you envision for your poor sweet heroine!!
I like this so far. Will comment on the rest once I read them.
XoxoX SWx
Yes, This edit was a phenomenal changer . The chapter was even more intriguing, and easy to follow. That's what I like.... and James is a creep....
Thumbs up!
I really liked it C!!
It was interesting and "Dirty talk" (grins) kept me hooked till the end
I am curious about the main character
Am excited to ride through the turns and twists of this story!!
Seems like our main character is a daredevil. with her profile info, that was just enough to see right into her character. 'talk dirty to me but I won't listen'. that said it all. and she's quite choosy. I mean the guy with the 'wanna have dirty fun' would have had me already. lol.
which brings me to Chris. I like the guy already! and I also like the way you let the dialogue express the characters' emotions and attitudes. you don't dive right into details but still the detail isn't lost.
you've captured a trending topic here. Cyber relationships and needless to say, its going to be a hit.
Hmmm...I find her fascinating. She is searching for something. What does she expect to find? And when and if she gets it would she really keep it? So many questions knowing of course how dark it can be down the rabbit hole.
TheCurious