A Christmas Tree

Reads: 160  | Likes: 0  | Shelves: 1  | Comments: 9

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Status: In Progress  |  Genre: General Erotica  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

A Christkass tree poem

She
Had a
Big clit
Hidden by
Her wet lips
Spreading them
Apart she showed
It to me resting there
Like a weelittle pink pearl 
In the middle of a moist bed
I gave it a lick with my tongue
It was soft as could be waiting for 
Me to suck it before we started to fuck
She bucked her hips when I sucked it with
Her juices starting to flow as over it my lips
Did go until they engulfed it very slow sucking
It in between them and licking it with the pointed
Tip of my tongue until she shook when she started to
CUM
CUM
CUM


Submitted: December 08, 2020

© Copyright 2021 Storywriterx. All rights reserved.

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Add Your Comments:

Comments

Spyguy

Very graphic picture painted with words! Nice!

Tue, December 8th, 2020 9:35pm

Author
Reply

Thanks Spyguy for reading it and your comment.
I wish that Christmas tree was mine.
Ron/SWx

Tue, December 8th, 2020 7:37pm

Amy F. Turner

I love Christmas Trees as it is that time of year and even better one decorated with sexy words that make me light up as well as this one does. Well done!

Wed, December 9th, 2020 9:18am

Author
Reply

Thanks Amy. I would like to use more than my words to make you light up and maybe get wet too.
XoxoX Ron

Wed, December 9th, 2020 8:11am

Trixie

Very nice job and great tree.

Thu, December 10th, 2020 4:04am

Author
Reply

Thanks Trixue for reading it and your comment..
If you were my tree I would love to decorate you with something white that isn't snow.
XoxoX Ron/SWx

Wed, December 9th, 2020 8:15pm

VanillaEssence

Clever.
Did you need a "software App" to do this christmas tree "rabbit out of the hat"

Fri, December 11th, 2020 12:20am

Author
Reply

No. Just formatted the words on the page and made each line have words that made the words in the line a little longer than the one above it.
Thanks for reading it and your comment. Glad you liked it.

Thu, December 10th, 2020 7:23pm

benawriter

Very clever, Ron both in form and content. Have a great holiday!

Fri, December 11th, 2020 3:12pm

Author
Reply

Thanks Ben. I wish I had that girl and her tree in my bedroom.
You have a good one too and stay safe
Ron

Fri, December 11th, 2020 7:36am

DampKitten

Did you know that there is such a thing as "Shape Poetry" - and this is an example. Look it up. I'm a particular fan of the trunk of your tree, Ron.

Sat, December 12th, 2020 4:41am

Author
Reply

Oooh! I would love to have it be your yule log and have you set it on fire.
Thanks for reading it and your comment.

Fri, December 11th, 2020 8:59pm

scs2141949

CLEVERLY DONE TO MAKE IT THAT SHAPE

Sat, January 30th, 2021 3:42pm

Author
Reply

Thanks for the comment. Glad you liked it
Ron/SWx

Sat, January 30th, 2021 8:23am

Other Content by Storywriterx

Short Story / General Erotica

Book / Gay and Lesbian

Book / General Erotica