Arousing metamorphis

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: General Erotica  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

I seen you,

it was you,

changed a bit,

from the alley that I sit.

different, yeah you are,

from afar,

changes noticed to what you are,

now, in front as you pass by me,

you glance, yeah I stare,

you different, you care, no,

still not for me, but you can't change the sight you throw when it's thrown at me.

the innocent girl you were, gone,

now I see you, cleavage popped,

you walk by, could have stopped.

new image, skirt up to crack, ass bare.

lips of red, lashes full, black tinted highlights through your hair.

you go about what you need to do,

you do you and I'll do what I got to do.

just remember this, as you passed,

that stare I didn't imagine, real to me as it was to you, same routine, same pattern.

you changed but that don't mean I can't see you,

your still in there, I know you see me too.





Submitted: September 22, 2019

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One of your more interesting pieces, a bit nostalgic and focused on aesthetic manipulation. The beauty of this is that we don't know much about the previous relationship between these two, or if there even is one. There's a lot of inference. You want to be vague in your poetry sometimes. It allows the reader to imagine. I think we get this girl is a prostitute (probably) but the thrust of the moment is not so much her occupation but her transcendence.

Mon, September 23rd, 2019 1:50am


Interesting take,
More interesting pieces as my other pieces aren't interesting ha ha all good, I'm only stirring.
Thanks for your comment, and thanks for dropping in

Sun, September 22nd, 2019 7:04pm

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