Suzette's Revenge

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: General Erotica  |  House: Room 501


Suzette's Revenge

 

This day, Suzette was lamenting the latest disaster in her life. She called her friend, Mary Ann and she left a message. “When you get this, I need to talk.”

An hour or so later, Mary Ann was knocking. “Got your message and came as soon as I could.”

You could have just called.”

“Your voice seemed like it might be something very serious and you might need a hug. So, what's up?”

Instead of a verbal answer, Suzette held up her smart phone and showed Mary Ann a series of pictures. “That's your husband but he's not kissing you.”

“There's more but I'd rather see it again.”

“Could there divorce you've talked about before now be on the horizon?”

“Its definitely there after I get my revenge and I think it would give him the biggest hurt would be to watch me screw another man.”

“Who would this other man be?”

“My neighbor Tony, for sure! And he's hung pretty well.”

“It seems your husband may not be the first to cheat.”

“No. I've always been completely faithful. I've seen him in speedos at his pool parties.”

“What now?”

“I'd start by approaching him but those old voices about being faithful keep stopping me.”

“Maybe this is a good time to ask yourself what you want.”

Suzette paused for several moments. “I want is to bang the hell out of my neighbor Tony. Since my cheating hubby took fidelity off the table, its time to have a little chat with that lovely man. “I think Tuesday. His wife has classes on Tuesday and Thursdays from 7 to 10.”

“Three hours should be enough time to talk and to get nasty too.”

“My thoughts exactly!”

At about that time, Tony was enduring another of his wife's accusatory tirades. “I know you're seeing someone and I'm going to find out about it.”

“Who put that idea in your head? I'll bet it was Bonnie or Mollie. Neither one has a brain between them.”

“But they said. . .”

“That's right. They speculate and you swallow it whole and suddenly I'm guilty of something I didn't do.” He was very angry by now and stood up with backbone firmly in place and said, “For the record, I have NOT been unfaithful. Just this month alone, I have gotten obvious offers from three very desirable and horny women to get naked and nasty with them, but I turned them all down for the sake of faithfulness. I now believe that turning them down was

unnecessary. If I get another offer, I'm going to take it without reservation, so it shouldn't be too tough for you catch me! Excuse me, I'm going to water the front yard while there's some light and I will be sleeping in the spare bedroom starting tonight.”

Tuesday night, about 6:30, Suzette saw his wife's car swing around the corner. She told her husband she was going for a short walk and scurried over to Tony's. Tony answered her knock. “Hey, neighbor. What's up?”

“Got a couple minutes? I've got something to talk over with you.”

“Come in. Coffee?”

“I'm good. This is the deal. I caught my soon-to-be ex husband cheating and I want some revenge.”

“What do you have in mind?”

“Putting him in some sort of bondage while he watches me bang another man.”

“I have a chair you might want to use. I'll be right back.” He returned with it and a ball gag, plus a paddle and whip.

“Whatcha got?”

“These things should work for you. They're things I bought to experiment with with my ball and chain but she's not into anything outside that box.”

“How do you suggest I use these things?”

“First, tell him something like 'How about something kinky tonight?' Put him in this chair and strap him in. Then show him these things. This ball gag will keep him quiet if he makes a fuss. If he makes anymore fuss, use this paddle or just show it to him. After that, you can get busy with the man you choose.”

“That's where you come in.”

“You surprise me with your request. I like it a lot. Any special way you want me to handle this?”

“With a hard dick, that's a certainty.”

“Its also a certainty that once won't be enough. Okay?”

“Perfect. I'll take all you have. Every single bit, as nasty as you want it.”

“We've got lots to talk about, Sweet Pea.”


Submitted: June 25, 2020

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DampKitten

There's a lot going on here, I must admit. I'd physically separate the scene between Tony and his wife away from the first just to give pause to the reader.

To be honest, you cover a huge amount of ground here in too much of a hurry. You have to savor conversations, examine photographs and videos, make lude comments and build anticipation. Pictures of a cheating husband presented by neighbor deserves a chapter to itself. The same is true of examining and plotting to seduce Tony. Tony's situation with his wife is yet another chapter, and we'd like to know why she's so convinced he's unfaithful. Usually those accusations come from somebody who is fooling around themselves. Expound upon your thoughts.

Fri, June 26th, 2020 2:36pm

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I THINK HER EMPTY SUSPICIONS ARE ENOUGH. I PREFER TO FIND A FINISH TO THIS STORY. I MIGHT ADD THAT SHE LATCHED ON TO THE SPECULATIONS OF HER GOSSIPY FRIENDS.

Fri, June 26th, 2020 8:57am

benawriter

I notice that with more than one of your stories posted, your first chapter is enticing to read, but ends all too soon, when we're anticipating and wanting more of the story. And then we never see a follow up....?

Mon, August 31st, 2020 12:46pm

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By the way, none of the three stories you commented on are finished. I don't understand your thoughts on this story.

Mon, August 31st, 2020 7:28am

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