Insomnia
Poem by: Redsex5
Insomnia
Late night
Pillow fight,
Restless turning,
Eyes burning,
Thoughts racing,
Incessant pacing,
Exhausted tired,
Mentally wired,
Forced relaxation,
Self vexation,
Daylight breaks--
Still awake...
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Comments
Are you a mind reader as well as an amazing writer. Daylight hasn't lit my bedroom yet here and I can't sleep. You just wrote a poem about me. ;-))
XoxoX Ron
I really like your focus with poetry, how you hone in on specific ideas and work those. Everybody can relate to this. Your rhyme is clever, your lines are tight, expressive and fully descriptive. It's well done.
Reading this makes me a bit restless because I can relate to it as well now and then.
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