Taken By You

Taken By You

Status: In Progress

Genre: Erotica

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Status: In Progress

Genre: Erotica

Summary

Carmen is a beautiful young woman but the debts left by her father bare heavily on her life until she is finally caught by the debt collectors. But just as she thinks it is the end, a man appears before her, knowing her name, he helps her escape from the debt collectors but life is far from easy with them gone....is she actually really safe now?

Summary

Carmen is a beautiful young woman but the debts left by her father bare heavily on her life until she is finally caught by the debt collectors. But just as she thinks it is the end, a man appears before her, knowing her name, he helps her escape from the debt collectors but life is far from easy with them gone....is she actually really safe now?

Chapter1 (v.1) - Taken By You

Author Chapter Note

Carmen is a beautiful young woman but the debts left by her father bare heavily on her life until she is finally caught by the debt collectors. But just as she thinks it is the end, a man appears before her, knowing her name, he helps her escape from the debt collectors but life is far from easy with them gone....is she actually really safe now?

Chapter Content - ver.1

Submitted: March 11, 2012

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CHAPTER 1

Carmen panted heavily as her quick, uncertain steps hit the littered pavement of the dark ally. For years this was her life, slumming in the streets running from the debt collectors inherited from her father, whom she had no idea where he had disappeared to or if he was even alive. She ran for dear life, dodging the large, army green dumpsters and bottles and cans that would indicate to her pursuers which route she took. She froze as she realized she was trapped at a dead-end. Releasing a slow sigh which caused her to heave, then she dragged air into her starving lungs after she had ran for so long.

Her head turned sharply as the loud voice of the men approached her- there was no where she could hide, this was it for her.

“Look!” shouted a tall, tanned man, his curly, jet black hair he slicked back into a ponytail and his hand rested on the holster around his waist. She heaved again as she watch them walk slowly towards her, their steps almost in time with the seconds of a clock, signaling her demise. Was this how it would end? Would her life amount to nothing more than gutters and food stamps? She thought silently as the men stood smirking in front her.

“I suspect you don’t have the money,” called the man with the ponytail. He made the first move to Carmen while the other two followed behind him.

She heaved again, the time for excuses was long gone and she felt the end drawing near.

“Bitch take my money and now can’t pay back,” the pony tailed man said as he grabbed a lock of Carmen’s long, jet black hair in his hand and tugged hard, yanking her head to the side he was standing.

Carmen wasn’t one for cowering and she stood there, hands at her side, but with the last burst of adrenalin coursing through her, she picked up her right hand and stiffened her two fingers which she dug into the man’s eyes. He wailed out in pain, causing him to let go Carmen’s hair and drop to his knees, face in hand. The other two men pulled out their guns and aimed at Carmen as she smiled smartly after giving the man her last parting gift.

“Shoot that bitch!” called the man who seemed to be the leader, still holding his face in pain and the two jerked back on the trigger.

But before they could release their bullets, Carmen saw a dark figure pass through the ally, then silently appear before the two men.

“I knew you would need my help sooner or later my sweet Carmen,” said the tall figure as he turned to look at Carmen, then he turned to the two men and grabbed their guns easily; only making them attempt to fight using hand-on- hand combat.

The man on the left raised his fist to the dark figure and directed it to his face which missed and sent the man flying in Carmen’s direction, she looked on in surprise as she watched the man who had known her name, control his body weight and directed a well -timed punch to the other man’s stomach with a soundless thud that made the man double over in pain while the other regain his balance and ran for Carmen, attempting to hit her. She dodged him with her agile body then pushed past the leader and headed back out the ally trying to escape the men.

“After her!” shouted the man on the ground, blood trailing from his eyes.

“You’re not gonna fucking touch her,” said the dark figure as he walked slowly to the men, his fists clenched and his temper flaring.

“And who the fuck are you to stop me!” said the man that had missed him earlier and stooped beside the leader.

The man just grinned, flashing his perfectly elongated fangs, he walked so slowly, taking in the fear of the other men- he loved when they feared him and he leaned in and whispered something to the man next to the leader, his eyes widened, then he grabbed his neck so tight he crushed his throat. Lifting him off the ground he dangled the man in the air and watched as his eyes rolled back in his head, then he cast him off to the side to deal with the pony-tailed leader.

He smelt the blood that had leaked from him, it was filthy, nothing he would want to drink…well nothing like Carmen’s. He leaned around his ear then he whispered something again.

“Who are you,” the leader called, temporarily blinded.

“Sigh, humans are so pathetic,” said the man so low the other man couldn’t hear, then he trailed his hand lightly over the man’s shoulder, then to his chest. When the leader felt the ice cold hand run down his body while he laid on his back, he brought his hand up to his chest, trying to pull it off but the man used his other hand and flexed his wrist, causing a sharp pain to ring out through his body as the man continued to pull it back. When he realized he wasn’t doing much lying on his back he tried to get up but the man pinned him down with a single finger while the leader struggled to get free. He bore his nail into the cloth, then penetrated his flesh easily, causing the man to whine like a helpless animal being slaughtered but he didn’t let up he bore deeper, then twisted his hand and forced it through the man’s cavity, digging deep until he found the slowly pulsing heart, ripped it from his body easily and smiled as the man laid lifeless, a gaping hole in his chest.

He had to deal with the last one.

He walked calmly to the other man; his hand reeked of drying blood as he looked it over almost aimlessly. The man laid there semi-conscious then he watched as he flinched back to reality and he smiled once again at their pitifulness. Deciding he would finish this one quickly, he drove his foot into the man’s back hard, the bones cracked under his boot like he was walking over sea shells, then he wiped the blood off in the man’s coat, pulled the collar of his up and walked back out of the ally.


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