a naughty little limmerick

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: General Erotica  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

just a saucy little poem i randomly came up with one day

Her eyes started to close slowly

As his head dipped out of sight

Her body was already shaking

In anticipation of this oral delight


His tongue flicked her button faster

And then it slowed right down

A moan escaped from between her lips

He quickly lapped at her juices, if he didn't he might drown


Since his tongue couldn't go any further

Into her sweet abyss

He slid in two of his fingers

And with them inside her he beckoned "Come here miss"


She had to bite down on her fist

To stop herself from screaming

Then pinched her nipples roughly

To ensure she wasn't dreaming


All at once, warmth overtook her body

And her hips jolted off the bed

He peaked up over her tummy

And chirped "Hey Honey...How bout some head?"

Submitted: March 24, 2016

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Sweet, cute and erotically humorous. If you've read any of my stories you could tell that you're writing about my favorite activity, so I loved this. Nicely done.

Thu, March 24th, 2016 10:22am


Just like a guy....always thinking of himself. ;)

Thu, March 24th, 2016 1:37pm


Wow. That was great. I loved your rhyming scheme. "Her sweet abyss", never heard that one before, what an awesome way to describe it!!!

Thu, March 24th, 2016 1:41pm


Very poetic, hot, & maybe a little bit naughty... And if you don't invite us, just a little haughty!

Fri, March 25th, 2016 12:37am

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