Revenge is Sweet

Revenge is Sweet

Status: Finished

Genre: Erotica

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Status: Finished

Genre: Erotica

Summary

(CANCELLED) Sun Li's life made a turn to the worst on the night of her first Orchestra concert. Her older sister, Min Li, was raped and murdered. No traces, nobody knows who killed her. Min had her whole life in order. She was the best attorney in Seattle. She had a loving fiancee, Luke Daniels. But, that all ended quickly one night. Sun, Luke and her family wants to move on, but Sun finds it near impossible to move on without her older sister. When she find leads to her murderer, Min's estranged ex-boyfriend, she wants to find him and give Min justice. When Luke hears of this, he joins in. Luke Daniels' whole life ended. His love is gone, so why move on? When Sun Li wants to track down the killer, he is in. On the way, he finds the same attraction he felt when he was with Min Li. Will he fight it? Will Sun fight her attraction as well? When they find him, will Min get her justice as well deserved?

Summary

(CANCELLED) Sun Li's life made a turn to the worst on the night of her first Orchestra concert. Her older sister, Min Li, was raped and murdered. No traces, nobody knows who killed her. Min had her whole life in order. She was the best attorney in Seattle. She had a loving fiancee, Luke Daniels. But, that all ended quickly one night. Sun, Luke and her family wants to move on, but Sun finds it near impossible to move on without her older sister. When she find leads to her murderer, Min's estranged ex-boyfriend, she wants to find him and give Min justice. When Luke hears of this, he joins in.

Luke Daniels' whole life ended. His love is gone, so why move on? When Sun Li wants to track down the killer, he is in. On the way, he finds the same attraction he felt when he was with Min Li. Will he fight it? Will Sun fight her attraction as well?

When they find him, will Min get her justice as well deserved?

Chapter1 (v.1) - It's Not True

Author Chapter Note

Sun Li's life made a turn to the worst on the night of her first Orchestra concert. Her older sister, Min Li, was raped and murdered. No traces, nobody knows who killed her. Min had her whole life in order. She was the best attorney in Seattle. She had a loving fiancee, Luke Daniels. But, that all ended quickly one night. Sun, Luke and her family wants to move on, but Sun finds it near impossible to move on without her older sister. When she find leads to her murderer, Min's estranged ex-boyfriend, she wants to find him and give Min justice. When Luke hears of this, he joins in. Luke Daniels' whole life ended. His love is gone, so why move on? When Sun Li wants to track down the killer, he is in. On the way, he finds the same attraction he felt when he was with Min Li. Will he fight it? Will Sun fight her attraction as well? When they find him, will Min get her justice as well deserved?

Chapter Content - ver.1

Submitted: February 08, 2014

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Yay, finally got it out! So, this starts off with a bang and kind of sad. This will be a kick ass story. Hope you enjoy it!

 

Chapter 1

It's Not True!

 

Breathe, Sun, you've done this over twenty times already. Well, by yourself or in front of your family. You will do just great!

 

The words of my older sister, Min, said to me this morning ran through my head. This is my first concert in Seattle's Orchestra. I am the lead violist. I looked out in the crowd and I see my parents, my sister Min and her fiancee, Luke. They all waved at me and I can feel the sweat coming from my forehead. “Now presenting Johann Sebastian Bach's Chaconne from Partita No. 2-- Sun Li!” The announcer said and I hear the audience applause and I sighed. This it it!

 

When they calmed down, I began to play. I close my eyes and hear the music in my head. One note after the other, the beautiful music of Bach played through my fingers. I played violin since I was four. I was not forced into it, I wanted to. My mother took me to a concert of this exact orchestra and this beautiful blonde violist played this exact piece. I wanted to be her. I am her, seventeen years later. I am the youngest violist here at the age of twenty-one.

 

I opened my eyes as I played the piece and I can see people in awe. Min is smiling at me and so is my parents. I don't think classical music is in Luke's favorites, but he seems to enjoy it. I played on and I began to relax to the music. My heart is in the music. I am breathing the music. When I finished the piece, the audience roared in applause and roar in cheer. I stood up and cheered. “Sun Li every one, her first concert!” The composer, John James, said. I sat down and we continued on with the concert. From Vivaldi's Four Seasons to a few pieces of Beethoven's Fifth Symphony.

 

After the concert finished with our piano player playing Beethoven's Midnight Sonata, which made me cry because my grandmother played it, I ran down to my family and Min hugged me. “Oh my God, that was beautiful!” Min said and I smiled.

 

“You have incredible talent, Sun. I am glad I bought you that violin. Grandmother Sun would be proud!” My father, Chan Li, said and I hugged him. My grandmother, she passed away a year ago, inspired me also to be in an orchestra. She was in one back in Beijing, where my family is from, for fifty years. She came to USA right before Min was born and lived here in Seattle until she passed away of old age.

 

My parents and Luke left and Min pulled me away so she can see me. “So, I have to run and do a few things, wanna meet me at Olympia Tower dinner, my treat? I want to celebrate your first concert!” Min said and I smiled.

 

“Yeah, let me go change and lets meet up in about...three hours?” I said and she nodded.

 

“I have to finish the hearing for Henry...” My stomach turned when she mentioned her ex-boyfriend, Henry Brown. He was a total jerk to her, and our family. I remember practicing for a high school concert and he came in and told me that I will not go anywhere playing violin. “I know you hate him, but I need to get things cleared up. I am representing myself and need to make a statement,” She added and I smiled. Min is a very successful lawyer, the best in Seattle. At her age of twenty-eight, she has done wonders!

 

“I understand, see you in a few hours!” I said and she leaned over and kissed my forehead.

 

“See you in a bit, koi fish!” She has always called me a koi fish. To regular Americans, they think she is calling me fishy, but in Chinese, a koi fish is a very majestic fish and beautiful. So, she's calling me beautiful.

 

I went to my car and went back to my apartment. I have to find something to do for three hours. My roommate and friend Dahlia Thomas should be home. Dahlia and I go back to second grade, when my parents decided that home schooling did no good for Min and I. I had a slight accent and kids made fun of me, except for Dahlia. We became instant friends.

 

I walked into my apartment and I can hear metal music playing through the house, coming from the living room. I walked in there and her brunette hair is bouncing up and down as she exercised. “I'm home, for a little bit!” I said and she turned off the music and wrapped a towel around her neck.

 

“Where are you going? On a date?” Dahlia asked and I rolled my eyes.

 

“Yeah right, Min is taking me out for dinner, celebrating my first concert!” I said and she pouted.

 

“I am sorry babe, I had to work and my boss has something up his ass today. He wouldn't let me leave work early to see it!”

 

“I understand, you need to leave that place!” She is an exotic dancer, and she is planning to get a better job somewhere. Her boss has threatened her in many ways if she decided to leave.

 

“I want to, but Tim said if I leave, then he will make sure I can't get another job. I might as well stay!” Dahlia said and I sighed. There has to be a way to get her out of there, but I got something else on my mind, dinner with my sister!

 

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I parked my car in the parking deck of Olympia tower and I sat there. This is weird, Min is usually here before me. My phone began to ring and I answered it, it's Min. “Hey, I have to run to Henry's place with the paperwork and I should be there in about a half hour. Sorry that I am late!” Min said and my heart began to race. I remember last time she confronted him two years ago. He tried to kill her by beating her up.

 

“Be careful, he is unpredictable!” I said and she sighed.

 

“Ever since I pressed charges on him, he has remained calm. I think I should be fine. If I have any trouble, I'll call father or Luke!”

 

“Okay, love you, be careful!”

 

“Love you, koi fish! Find us a table!” I giggled and got off the phone and headed up to to the restaurant. Olympia tower is known for their clubs, but they got very elegant restaurants as well. I never been here, until Min began to make money and took me here on a regular bases. I walked in and the lady at the podium seen me and smiled. “Table for two?” She asked me and I nodded. She took me to the table with a great view, I can see the Space Needle.

 

I ordered a bottle of white wine for Min and I and went ahead and order an appetizer of Tuna Tartar. I sat there and waited for a good thirty-five minutes for Min before I went ahead and ordered our regular dishes. I looked over and I see a couple, a beautiful couple and smiled. Wish I can get a man that would love me as much as that couple loves each other. Luke and Min loves each other, I can see that. They are perfect for each other. She is a gorgeous woman and he is a very handsome...well handsome doesn't cover that, sexy, man.

 

It's been an hour since Min called me last and she is not here. I waved down the waiter and asked to take our food back. “Min should be here!” I told him and he knows us and I can tell he is worried.

 

“Have you tried calling her? Or your parents? Fiancee?” He asked and I grabbed my cell phone and dialed her number.

 

“Hey, this is Min Li, Attorney at Law, I cannot come to the phone right now...” her voice mail said and I ended the call. Shit, that is not good! I called Luke but before I dialed his number, father called me. “Father, have you heard...” I stopped when I can hear him cry and my mother cried in the background.

 

“Min, the police just called, she was attacked. She is bad, meet us at Seattle Memorial!” Father said and I stood up and ran. Oh no, Henry attacked her!

 

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I ran into the emergency room and I can see my parents and Luke in the waiting room. I ran to my parents and hugged them. “Min was attacked by her car in some parking lot near Olympia Tower. She was...she was...” My mother broke down in tears. My mother, Sai Li, is a very strong woman. Seeing her like this, I know something is wrong.

 

“Bié d?nx?n, w? de ài, t? shì h?o,” (Don't worry, my love, she is okay!) my father said in our native language.

 

“What happened?” I asked and Luke ran his fingers through his dark blonde locks and looked up at me and his blue eyes are filled with tears.

 

“Some jack ass attacked her and raped her. After he finished, he stabbed her and ran,” Luke said and I sit down beside him, shell shocked. No, they must have the wrong person! Min knows how to defend herself!

 

“It can't be Min!” I said and ran my fingers through my black hair.

 

“It is Min! The doctors are working on her right now. She will be okay!” Mother said and I leaned against her shoulder and closed my eyes and fought the tears. I need to remain strong. I need to remain strong for Min!

 

Not even twenty minutes later, a male doctor walked in and he is covered in blood. Oh no! “Are you Min Li's family? I am Dr. Xavier, the head ER doctor,” he asked and we all stood up and ran.

 

“How is our daughter? Will she be okay, doctor?” Father asked and I gripped my hands tighter around my parents hands and he bowed his head down. My heart went to the floor and I think I lost all my color in my face.

 

“Min established horrible injuries from her attack. She lost three pints of blood before responders reached her. The injuries we're catastrophic. I'm sorry, we did all we could. She did not make it.” I can hear Luke crying behind me, my mom wailing in tears as my father held her in his arms. I just stood there, frozen. “Do you want to see her?” Dr. Xavier asked my parents and I can hear them agree.

 

“Sun? Sun, are you okay?” Luke asked me and I can feel his touch my shoulder. I jerked back and shook my head. I tried opening my mouth, but it failed. Mother grabbed my hand and all four of us went back to her room and I stopped in mid walk. Min, she is...very pale. Not moving. Not breathing. There is blood towels everywhere. I can see the sheet they used, covered in blood. I see bags of blood on the IV stand. My parents and Luke walked over and cried over her body. I just stood here, still frozen. “Sun, come tell your sister goodbye,” Father said and I shook my head. That is not Min, that is not my sister. That is somebody else!

 

“That is not Min!” I said and I took in a quivering breath in and I can feel the tears brimming in my eyes. “THAT IS NOT MIN!” I screamed and mother ran over to me and held my face in her hands.

 

“That is Min, she is dead!” mother said and I shook my head.

 

“No! No!” I can hear the nurses and doctors behind me and I just repeated “No!” over and over. That is not her!

 

“I think a sedative would work...” a doctor said and I tried to tell him that I don't want one, but I can feel myself going light headed and I lost control of my legs. I fell to the ground and I went black.

 


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