She tied her hair in a knot before going in.
Her smooth white skin glistened with the steam of the room.
She was longing for a gentle touch.
One that would make her knees quiver.
As she closes her eyes, she sees her coming.
Grabbing her from behind, she made her feel what she had patiently waited for.
Grabbing her, she teased her nipple with her fingertips knowing that she owned her for that moment.
Her caramel complexion glowed.
Her eyes would not dare open.
The end was coming all too soon.
She knew that the feeling would not last forever.
Her mind followed her fingers in and out motions.
Biting her lips, she let out the rawness of her climax.
She looked for her.
She could still feel her touch.
The morning light suddenly became glorious.
Submitted: March 06, 2008
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Your early pieces are different, aren't they? I like them. I like the raw eroticism. Still, I love how your writing has matured.
Fri, October 1st, 2021 4:28am
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A lot has changed in me. I guess my writing reflects it. Thank you for noticing.
Thu, October 7th, 2021 6:33am
She makes you feel more? Maybe he hasn’t been the right one!? Or are you a male that uses the picture of a woman?
Sat, October 2nd, 2021 2:47am
She makes you feel more? Maybe he hasn’t been the right one!? Or are you a male that uses the picture of a woman?
Sat, October 2nd, 2021 2:47am
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Not sure if you are being sarcastic here. Can I, a woman, not write to another woman?
Mon, October 4th, 2021 5:25am
But of course you may… I guess I just didn’t envision it that way!
Tue, October 5th, 2021 8:36am
As you have just witnessed NR.
Us Silk "oldies" crave the writings of the early era.
This appears to have taken place in a sauna.
No better place for a quickie experience.
Nicely penned.
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Thank you.
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Whew!
Sat, March 8th, 2008 2:00amAuthor
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Thats Right!
Fri, March 7th, 2008 7:48pm