In that isle

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: General Erotica  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

My secret...

Seeing you in all your glory, walking beside me, making me feel again.

Now you stand beside me, I lean over and touch you.

You tell me to stop but your eyes are begging for more.

I take your breasts in my hands.

Slide my hand down slowly.

Finally, I'm there.

Feeling your flesh, your wetness.

I crave for the taste of your release.

The sensation that makes us weak.

The smell of your hair is urging me to go deeper.

Can you handle the feeling of having me there?

Oh, what a tease.

You have awakened the passion within.


Submitted: March 06, 2008

© Copyright 2021 Natalia Rondon. All rights reserved.

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DampKitten

Fantastically erotic, girl
Last line: awaken to awakened (past tense)
Simple piece, but I've read it over and over. Word choice is amazing...

Fri, October 1st, 2021 4:24am

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Noted and made the change. Ty

Thu, October 7th, 2021 6:34am

Spyguy

The passion burns, for touches learns, rejection spurns, a climax earns!!!

Sat, October 2nd, 2021 2:51am

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Too much rhyme!!! lol Don't particularly like to rhyme as much.

Mon, October 4th, 2021 5:23am

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