Dominate Me

Poem by: MYSTICARAYNE

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Push me up against the door

Kiss me, tell me i'm your whore

I am your sinner, I want to scream

Degrade me, put me on my knees

Pour candle wax all on my chest

Watch it dripping down my breasts

You hold me still as you pour the rest

Fulfilling my desires

Shove your head between my thighs

Lick me, stick it deep inside

Anticipation I simply cannot hide

Whisper to me little lies

You know I love it when you cum on my face

I lick it off because I love how it tastes

You've really put me in my place

Please dominate me more

Submitted: September 11, 2020

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DampKitten

Wow. That's intense. I love the raw energy, the explicit description. The reference to 'sinning' sort of infers an illicit affair, though that's not detailed. The meter is not perfect throughout (and doesn't need to be), but you rely on more than rhyme as a poetic element. There's a 'shock' effect to this. You use 'off rhyme' in your pieces frequently (including this one).

Do you ever write formal poetry such as a Sonnet for example...a pre-established format?

This is a very hot piece!

Fri, September 11th, 2020 2:06pm