Push me up against the door
Kiss me, tell me i'm your whore
I am your sinner, I want to scream
Degrade me, put me on my knees
Pour candle wax all on my chest
Watch it dripping down my breasts
You hold me still as you pour the rest
Fulfilling my desires
Shove your head between my thighs
Lick me, stick it deep inside
Anticipation I simply cannot hide
Whisper to me little lies
You know I love it when you cum on my face
I lick it off because I love how it tastes
You've really put me in my place
Please dominate me more
Submitted: September 11, 2020
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Another inference to her submissiveness, hot and lusty, naughty and alluring. You have much the same desires that many of us men do....
Sun, September 13th, 2020 5:25pm
To be taken and used by our female partner, mistress, etc.
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Wow. That's intense. I love the raw energy, the explicit description. The reference to 'sinning' sort of infers an illicit affair, though that's not detailed. The meter is not perfect throughout (and doesn't need to be), but you rely on more than rhyme as a poetic element. There's a 'shock' effect to this. You use 'off rhyme' in your pieces frequently (including this one).
Fri, September 11th, 2020 2:06pmDo you ever write formal poetry such as a Sonnet for example...a pre-established format?
This is a very hot piece!
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Yes, exactly. I like to use rhyming, but I also want the viewer to use their imagination. I don't rhyme in every verse because I want to be unique.
Fri, September 11th, 2020 12:23pm