Brown Eyes

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Adult Romance  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

I love those brown eyes, baby.

Those brown eyes

Are like the soil to my soul

I plant my flower, and watch it grow

The honey brown that makes me want a taste

Can it get any sweeter?

Will you put it all on my face?

When I lick it off it gets arousing

The forceful submission, when I get my pounding

The brown sunset that emerges through those eyes

Will always make me hypnotized

So give me those brown eyes, and i'll give you my green

As we shall combine as one, in the in-between.

Submitted: September 07, 2020

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Love this! Again, your analogies and poetic inference are superb. Very very interesting imagery - unique and erotic. What I love about your writing so far is that you don't rely on explicit description, yet your piece is emphatically arousing.

I have to ask, do you read poetry actively? If you don't, you need to start. You are very talented. Reading will inspire and educate you further.

Tue, September 8th, 2020 12:18am


Thank you so much! I do read poetry, not often, but just once in a blue moon. I suppose I became so interested in poetry when I was a teenager, and the passion never left. It has always been a safety net for me to express my feelings.

Tue, September 8th, 2020 1:06am


I respectfully add my admiration as well as adoration to the ongoing verbiage between you and Dampkitten... She is, above all, an amazing literary critic, who analyzes with grace & poetic style, the offerings that are posted here in this Garden of verse, with the fervor of a professional, yet loving gardener; Pruning a little here, fertilizing just a tad there, watering everywhere with joy, and encouraging the souls of our minds, through various methods, to flourish vibrantly in the soil of environment here provided!!!

Wed, September 9th, 2020 3:54pm

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