Forget Bout You.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

I'm kinda new with this writing stuff but I didn't know where else to go to write so yeah. Feedback greatly appreciated. Thanks for reading.

People say that words can't hurt you, Deep down they know it isn't true.

As the marks outside begin to heal, I'm in more pain than I can feel.

I tried to let you go, I tried not to let my feelings show.

But I can't let you walk out the door, While knowing I won't see you anymore.

You stab and taunt my soul, Around you I can't stay in control.

You know how to turn it back around, Take away my choice of how.

You broke my trust without blinking, You stole everything without thinking.

Or caring about what I would do, But no matter how hard I try.

Or how many tears I cry, I can't forget about you.


Submitted: August 12, 2014

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I liked this one... I think you'd probably like some of my poetry also, maybe you could come visit? My favorite line was; "But no matter how hard I try; Or how many tears I cry, I can't forget about you."
That one line says it all... It is the most precious part of your whole poem, if you ask me...

Tue, August 12th, 2014 8:24am


Thanks. I'll definitely make some time and check some of your poetry out. Thanks for reading.

Tue, August 12th, 2014 3:16pm


Lovely poem and sad. But that is just the way I like them. You have a talent so please write more

Sat, October 11th, 2014 12:17pm

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