To let it go
Poem by: Murnit
Surely one person cannot bear so much pain
Im looking for something else that might hurt more
And the blade seems shiny, the touch of it cool
Contrasting against the dull of my soul, the fire thats scorching
Letting you go, when we are so grown into each other
I know Im tearing us apart and we will never be whole again
Trying to find the strength to start, new, over
No crystal ball to show me if we will be OK
I need this blade to give me some relief
Hoping to numb some of the great sorrow in me
Knowing if I see blood run I am still human
Not a monster, the one I see when you look at me so hurt
Will redemption ever be mine as I close the door
You said you will never take me back
Perhaps, I am a fool
god I am sorry !...
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This was powerfully poignant in its dance of sorrow. It seems to reason Virtual has yet to leave...The sorrow still plays havoc in your dreams...It begs to fear the future, though, the future is always around the corner. Sometimes..it is not all that bad. It reminds you to reach for the stars; it reminds to kiss the moon...but not the fool! Rock on my friend of the pen because your poetry only explores deeper caverns of your soul as it continues to find gold!
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You are the master of powerful comments. Thanks for always giving me your honest feel on my work.
Yes pain is terrible to look at and even more so seeing it on paper.
Thanks for reading Murch.. M x
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Hang in there; fantastic, painful pom!
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Thanks Mike.. M
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hello dear
a really good poem..
i like the choices of words it simple but meaningful
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Hi Thank for reading and I'm glad u like it M x
Now that was chilling and soul saddening all at the same time. I'm back sorry I was away so busy with teh novel and the web site and everything else thats going on.
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Thanks for reading M x
Nice
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Thanks
Anonymous
Powerful poem Murnit.....x
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Thanks babe x
Anonymous
Heartfelt! Powerful!Good.
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Thanks , my poetry is me and its where I live M x
Anonymous
Very powerful. I could feel the pain dripping out of your words.
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M x
Anonymous
Wow interesting write. My blood chills.
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:)
jmurch