Leaving Lilypad

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The thoughts of a beetle as he leaves the comfort of his Lilypad community...

Leaving Lilypad ..
Once, in a little pond, in the muddy water under the lily pads, there lived a little water beetle in a community of water beetles. 
They lived a simple and comfortable life in the pond with few disturbances and interruptions.
Once in a while, sadness would come to the community when one of their fellow beetles would climb the stem of a lily pad and would never be seen again. They knew when this happened; their friend was dead, gone forever. 
Then, one day, one little water beetle felt an irresistible urge to climb up that stem. 
However, he was determined that he would not leave forever. He would come back and tell his friends what he had found at the top. 
When he reached the top and climbed out of the water onto the surface of the lily pad, he was so tired, and the sun felt so warm, that he decided he must take a nap. 
As he slept, his body changed and when he woke up, he had turned into a beautiful blue-tailed dragonfly with broad wings and a slender body designed for flying. 
So, fly he did! 
And, as he soared he saw the beauty of a whole new world and a far superior way of life to what he had never known existed. 
Then he remembered his beetle friends and how they were thinking by now he was dead. 
He wanted to go back to tell them, and explain to them that he was now more alive than he had ever been before. 
His life had been fulfilled rather than ended. But, his new body would not go down into the water. 
He could not get back to tell his friends the good news. Then he understood that their time would come, when they, too, would know what he now knew. -
So, he raised his wings and flew off into his joyous new life! 

Submitted: April 03, 2016

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Peter Rancer

Like all Misty's work this story is at once simple but profoundly thought provoking. A modern day Aesop.

Sun, April 3rd, 2016 9:26am


Cool story! Is this one unique to you or is it one you heard from another? Like it.

Sun, April 3rd, 2016 11:56pm


So simple and yet so beautiful and full of meaning.

Mon, April 4th, 2016 8:41am

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