Stained

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

I would like you to read and tell me what you think I am describing.

"Now open your eyes and look around you.Use the senses that you have to describe it." The teacher stood there and looked at his young student wondering what would happen once she had opened her eyes for the first time.

The girl opened her eyes feeling shivers run up and down her spine. When she finally got to see a beautiful variety of transparent colors. What she saw was so admirable that she would like to touch it but couldn't reach it. She smiled seeing that it clearly looked smooth at the surface. She could now smell the paint the artist put over the masterpiece. She couldn't hear anything at the moment but she can imagine a chiming sound coming from it.

She stood there and looked at her teacher who looked a little upset with himself.'What could possibly be wrong with him?' She asked herself looking at him with such curiousity.

The teacher drew in a breath looking like he knew something the innocent five year old girl didn't.

Soon enough a gunshot out of nowhere making what the girl saw shatter to pieces. The sound of it hitting the floor wasn't the beautiful chime that she had imagined but turned out to be a violent crashing sound against the Marble floor.

The girl at this point was going through a shock phase not realizing that she was on the ground bleeding.When she looked at her right arm there was a sharp green object stuck  in her skin. Her last words were,"How can something so beautiful be so dangerous?"


Submitted: April 27, 2015

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Spyguy

This one was very sad... But also very well written, good job!

Tue, April 28th, 2015 8:57am

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Thank you I'm glad that it had the effect on you that I was expecting. It's supposed to be sad.

Tue, April 28th, 2015 7:35am

Spyguy

Did she just obtain her eyesight?

Tue, April 28th, 2015 8:59am

Author
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Yes. Yes the girl just obtained her eyesight at the age of five, that is what makes the story all the more sad.

Tue, April 28th, 2015 7:37am

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