Recap: You show me around your house its so beautiful, then we get at the end of the hallway the last door and room I haven't see and you say "my room" and then you open it and what I see makes me gasp...
Your room looks so exotic the curtains are close and a deep red,there's no light in the room the only thing illuminating the room are the scented candles you have around your room the bed sheets are a deep red made of silk, the vanilla and cinnamon scent make the room smell delicious to me, it all looks so romantic and erotic it's a very good combination at least for me and the rose petals around the room? Amazing
"it's amazing" I say "girl you make this room look so good, and romantic, and erotic at the same time...wait don't tell me your waiting for somebody else to come here?" And for some reason that makes me feel jealous, very very jealous, and I don't know why but for some reason I look down and on the floor I see something in weird shape like a banana or sausage and it's pink, so me being the curious I pick it up and just when I'm asking you what is it "wha..." it turns on and its starts to vibrate making me gasp and say "wow this feels so soft but its vibrating, wh.." and just then I'ts like a bulb just turn on inside my head and immediately know what it is making me gasp again and drop it
"y y you you... you were.." I stutter unable to finish the sentence and you say "yes? Me,what?" With a mischief in your eyes and I know your teasing me making me feel uncomfortable knowing what I'm trying to say "you you were 'playing' with yourself w when I came here w w weren't you?" I say
"If by 'playing' you mean masturbating? Then yes I was" you say making me blush and nod
"you wanna know why?" You ask me
"wh why?" I say.
"because I was horny thinking of this girl I been naughty dreaming about and I just.can't.get.her.out.of.my.head." you say slowly like I'm not gonna understand what your saying
"really?" I ask feeling disappointed and jealous because you were dreaming of another girl, probably more beautiful then me
"yes really, and you wanna know who it is?"
"but even if you tell me I still won't know who it is because I probably don't know her"
"but you do know her" you say taking one step towards me and winking
me of course being as clueless as I am frown and say "but how can you say that? If I don't know where I am how would I know who she is?"
you roll your eyes at me saying "well it's obvious no?" I shake my head no "so pretty and yet so dumb" you say exasperated to yourself "well the reason why I'm sure you know her it's because that girl... " you say getting really close to me "it's you"
I gasp saying "wh what? Bu but h how?..."
"yeah now you see why I was surprised to see you at my door? I thought I was still dreaming. But now that I know your real..." you say touching my cheek making me tingle, looking into my eyes with intensity and something else, maybe...lust? I don't know what it is but it makes me feel like I have butterfly's in my belly "I don't plan in letting you go"
And I feel like I'm about to explode with happyness but there's still doubt in my head "but h how c can you say that? Shouldn't you feel disgusted that you dream about me? And shouldn't that be a nightmare coming true instead of a dream? I mean I'm n not beautiful not even pretty, I'm fat not skinny, and I feel like I don't deserve anything.. shouldn't that be reason enough to just kick me out of your house? You don't even know me, for all you know I might have escaped from prison or just killed somebody and I'm trying to hide so nobody can find me, I mi.."
"will you just shut up" you say interrupting me putting your fingers over my lips to silence me "just..stop ok? First of all no I shouldn't feel disgusted by dreaming about you on the contrary I feel like is the best tasting thing I have ever tried, no it's not a nightmare every time I dream about you is like the best dreams I ever had, and you not being beautiful? That's like the worst lie ever, you are one of the most beautiful girls I have ever seen in my life, sure your not skinny but that don't make you fat, fat would be like 300 pounds and you girl don't weight that much your just a tad overweight but not much, even if you weighted that much I would still find you beautiful and the best dream I ever had and what is that you not deserving anything? You deserve the best things so no that shouldn't be a reason to kick you out, sure I don't know you but you are not a killer so just don't say that and don't think I don't know what your doing, your just saying all this because you think you don't deserve anything, because you are doubting me but believe me I'm not lying to you ok? So stop ok?" You say looking at me like saying 'argue with me and you see what happens' so I nod but there's still that nagging feeling and as if reading my mind you say "ugh you are one of the most stubbornness people I have ever known" grabbing my face with both hands you say "since you don't believe me I'm gonna show you how true my words are" and then... you kiss me taking me by surprise, feeling like there's an eruption inside my stomach making me tingle all over my body it takes me about a second but I relax my body and start kissing you back, your lips feel so soft against mine, like.. velvet, kissing me slowly without opening our mouths, so slow but... it feels like the best kiss I ever had "mhmm" I moan and you stop, just then I notice I had closed my eyes
"that was..."
"that was..." we say at the same time making us chuckle
"amazing"
"amazing" we say rubbing your nose against mine
"I I have never been kissed like that, so...slow and romantic...thank you" I say
"you have nothing to thank me, I been wanting to do that to you ever since I started dreaming about you, but now that I know you exist? I plan on doing this.." you say, and then you whisper "for a very. Very long time" and then you wink at me
"how long its a a very long time for you?" I ask you still doubting you
"as in..as long as you want me"
"really?"
"yes really"
"then show me"
"you still don't believe me?"
"to tell you the truth? No"
"oh girl you have no idea what you just did, I'm gonna show you alright" and then you kiss me...again.. but this time with more passion making me gasp, and letting your tongue inside my mouth "mhmm" I moan, your lips so soft, your tongue stroking mine soft and battling against mine, of course you win...your mouth so tasty like..a sweet fruit that I can't get enough of, we are all lips and tongue you grab my hair at the nape pulling making me moan in pleasure graving me and kissing me like you can't get enough of, and I'm meeting your mouth with the same unreserved need pulling your hair too and massaging your scalp making you moan too we're kissing each other with so much intense that you push me against the wall breaking our kiss "oh girl your mouth tastes..amazing I just.. can't get enough your mouth tastes better then my dreams..." you say panting, and you grab my head again and I say "your mouth tastes better then anything I have ever got... it's strange for me to like chocolate because I don't... like it that much but you?" I grab your head to pulling you closer to me "taste better then any chocolate I have ever tasted... it's like you ruin me for any other chocolate"
"oh really?"
"mhmm yes really"
you smile and kiss me briefly saying "well in that case, I can't wait to ruin you for everything else" only this time I'm the one to pull you and kiss you
then you pull back and whisper "I can't wait to taste you all over and see if your body taste's the same? Or better then your mouth, and if that's the case you'll ruin me for everything else too"
"then I hope I do because I want to ruin you for everything else" I whisper back "and I'm sure your body taste's the same addictive flavor..mhmm I can't wait to taste you too, well if you let me of course" I blush making you chuckle
"oh I like how you blush when you think naughty, and I can't wait until your body is all flush and sweating" then we're all over each other again kissing passionately and full of need..need for each other..need for our mouths.
Our hands running over each others backs, over our hair, massaging each others scalp, you start kissing me down my jaw..under my sternum..down my throat... into my collar bone.. then up again under my earlobe biting it and sucking making me wet and moan "you like that Johanna? Mhmm? Tell me you like that?" You whisper in my ear
"mhmhm oh yes baby I like it, I like it a lot and more when you whisper my name like that, wait.. if we are gonna do this I gotta know your name too since I see you already know mine, I think it's only fair if I know yours don't you think?"
"yes I guess is only fair my name is..Rielle"
"that's a strange name"
"yes it is, but that's what my mom named me, she said it's unique"
"yes unique.."
"what you don't like it?"
"if you let me finish then you would know..as I was saying yes unique.. just like you, I like it I like it a lot.. Rielle"
"oh Johanna I like how you say my name too" then you pull my earlobe into your mouth sucking hard then you put your hand over my breast lightly touching my nipple making it hard and wetter then I was, making me gasp and moan at the same time
you pull back and look down into my breast "oh I can see that your nipples like that" I look down and yes indeed you can see how hard my nipples are through my shirt "and I barely touch it, my my you have such big breasts" and you grab them both with your hands as if weighting them "I can't believe I never seen them before, are they real?"
"ugh of course they're real, why do people always ask about them? What I girl can't have big breasts without them being real?"
"no, I'm not saying that its just..that I have never had big breasts as yours in my hand"
"how many girls have you been with?" And just the thought of you with another woman gives me pain in my chest I don't know why? Making me frown
"what? Are you jealous Johanna?"
"what makes you say that Rielle?"
"because you frowned and your tone changed a little bit, but don't worry there's never been another girl just a guy but I have seen breasts, but never as big as yours unless they were faked, so it's a surprise that's all"
"so I'll be your first girl?
"mhm yes"
"so I'll be like the girl you'll get to experience with and take out your curiosity, and then you'll dump me?"
"ugh oh my God! Will you stop with your negatively? Please? Yes you'll be my first girl but you won't be "the" girl I can take out my curiosity with, you'll be the girl I'll want to be with for a very long time so I won't just dump you, and I'll show you" and you kiss me and we're all lips and tongues again this time harder and with more passion witch I didn't think it was possible, you press me against the wall with your body putting your right leg between my legs..grinding it against my pussy witch becomes much wetter then before making me moan and pull back from our kiss to get air back into my lungs..making you kiss me down my jaw.. into neck... my ear whispering "you like that?" Grinding your leg harder against my pussy "ah" I moan, "tell me Johanna you like that?"
"fuck! Yes yes I love it, oh please"
"oh yeah? You love it?"
"yes Rielle I love it"
"oh baby this is nothing compare to what I'm gonna do to you" you say putting you right hand under my thin silk shirt to put it against my breast and squeeze making me take a big breath, witch you do too when you feel I'm wearing a lace bra "oh my my, what do we have here?" You say pulling my silk shirt at the hem, over my head and off "ohh fuck! Girl.." you say running your index finger over the lace and top of my breast "definitely so much better in person, I didn't imagine you as a person to put on lace, I imagine you as a person who wore simple bras but this?" You say looking down still running your finger over it making me tingle more "is really a surprise"
"actually... your right I don't wear lace, I don't know what happen but all my bras seemed to have disappear, and this is all I had left. My moms boss brought this for her mother because her mother told her she wore a size 38D and it turns out this were to big for her, so she asked my mom if she knew anybody who wore this size..and so she thought of me and told her I was that size, so that's why I had this in my drawer if not? I wouldn't have any bra on at all witch is not good for me, because I have big breasts so not putting a bra is not an option"
"well then thank god all your bras disappeared and this is all you had left.. your skin is so flawless white and smooth, and this pink lacey bra makes your breasts pop.. so so beautiful I love it. But you won't have it on for long" and you squeeze both breasts, witch are about to pop out of my bra... then you pull down the cups making my breasts stand up, the air hitting my nipples witch harden even more.. so I'm all trust up with my nipples up towards your mouth as if begging you "it seems your nipples like that.. your breasts so white and your nipples brown and big.. oh I like that Johanna I like it a lot and I can't wait to have them in my mouth" then your head goes down and you put your mouth over my left nipple... sucking.. running your tongue around and around
"ah Rielle" I moan "fuck" and I become the wettest I have ever been, I feel like my juices are running down my leg
with your leg between my pussy, pushing it against it..then you bite down a little bit on my nipple making me squirt a little.. then you switch putting your mouth over my right nipple, sucking...pulling.. running your tongue around and around..biting it making me start riding your leg "fuck.. please, more please" I beg
"you want more baby?"
"yes please"
"is your pussy wet baby?"
"yes Rielle, so so wet for you.. only you"
"damn right only me " then you cup my pussy with your hand "this pussy is mine you hear? Only mine!"
"yes!.. yours, only yours mhmm please baby?" I beg again I don't know for what, but you seem to know because you take your mouth off my nipple making a popping sound.. kissing me again, and I start trying to take off your shirt but you won't let me "no baby this time is for you, only you.. you can do that later right now I want to take off you pants" then you un bottom my pants pulling down the zipper... going down to take them off revealing my white cotton panties "now this baby? This is more you, white and innocent.." then you look down and say "well not that innocent, look at you.. so wet, your panties are soaking wet with your pussy juices" then you put your nose against my panties, taking a deep breath making me blush of embarrassment "mhmm baby, you smell so good, I can't wait to put my mouth in here" then you get up and kiss me.. hard with your left hand on my breast, pulling my nipple, and your right hand going down my stomach.. under my panties, cupping my pussy, rubbing my clit with your index finger.. then you put your finger inside me making me cry out in pleasure
"fuck baby! Your pussy is so wet Johanna, so sleek with your juices making my finger slide in easily" just then my pussy clasps down on your finger "oh yes baby, that's right clasp down on that finger.. fuck your pussy is so tight.. and I can't wait to fuck it" then you start moving your finger slowly in and out...in...out...in...out
and it feels so amazing "oh Rielle... your finger feels so... good"
"mhmm really?"
"yes bab-" just then you twist your finger while moving in and out slowly gaining speed "fuck!"
"you like that baby?"
"mhmm ye yes"
"does your pussy like that?" Somehow making me wetter "mhmm I can tell your pussy likes that, and I love how good your pussy feels around my finger, so wet and yet so tight so so good baby... tell me baby do you like that?"
"yes baby I like that.. my pussy loves it. Can I play with your pussy too? I want to make you feel good too, please?" I beg
"as much as I would like that baby, believe me baby I want your fingers in my pussy too... but right now is all about you, so thank you but not right now"
"but I want to make you feel good too?"
"I know baby, but your already making me feel good"
"but how? Your not letting me touch you"
"how? With your pussy baby, with your pussy clasp around my finger.. pulsing around it? That's how your making me feel good by making you feel good baby, besides a good lover always lets the other one come first" somehow you saying lover makes me feel a little hurt and angry
"is that all I am to you? A 'lover' and nothing more?" You then pull my hair.. hard and you come really close to my face
"how many times do I have to tell you?" You say through greeted teeth "you are not just a lover to trow away and use, your much more then that, your a lover to keep to love, and when I said a good lover always lets the other one come first? I meant that as a figure of speech but you baby? You really are more then that, so I'm gonna ask you something you don't have to say yes right now if you don't want to, but I'm gonna ask it anyway ok?"
"ok ask me"
"ok.. will you be my girlfriend?" I gasp
"wh what?"
"like I said you don't have to answer right now I just thought I should ask"
"are you really asking me that?"
"yes, is that bad?"
"is not that is bad, but are you really asking me that because you want me to be your girlfriend? Or because you think I want that?"
"because I want you to be my girlfriend, believe me if I didn't want you as a girlfriend? I wouldn't be asking that"
"oh.. well in that case.."
"yeees? Like I said you don't have to answer right now"
"but I want to answer right now" I say pouting
"ok then, answer"
"like I said, in that case... yes I do.. I do want to be your girlfriend"
"really!?"
"yes really" then you start laughing
"wow really!?" I nod "oh thank God! You just made me the happiest woman alive, you have no idea how happy you made me"
"second happiest woman alive, and yes I do have an idea, because you made me the happiest woman alive when you asked me that"
"really?"
"yes really, now who's the one with self doubt?"
"thank you baby" then you kiss me passionately "I love you baby, you have no idea how much I love you and how long I waited for this to come true, thank you"
"I love you too, I know we just met, but I love you" then we're kissing again with our hands all over each other, somehow I don't know how but somehow I end up taking your shirt off, then your mouth is on my nipple again, sucking.. with your finger on my pussy again, making me so much much wetter, twisting your finger going in...out...in..out, sucking biting my nipple sucking hard, and while your to busy doing that I manage to take off your bra, graving your breasts on my hands, cupping them, your skin feels so soft your breasts not as big as mine, but just the right size for me and I squeeze, my fingers around your nipples making then hard, and they feel like two little pebbles, making my mouth water fuck I have never have breasts in my hands but yours feel so good, I don't want to stop touching them making you moan and gain speed with your finger
"fuck baby that feels so good!" Just then you get down on your knees pulling my right leg over your shoulder and start getting closer to my pussy, making me gasp and cover my pussy with my hands "wh what are you doing?"
"what am I doing? What I been trying to do for a long time in my dreams and in life and somehow I can never put my mouth on you, but right now I'm gonna do just that"
"but I'm wet"
"and that's just how I want you baby"
"but I stink"
"oh no baby" you say putting your nose over my hands inhaling deeply "you smell so good like an exotic fruit, and I can't get enough of it, and now I'm gonna know if you taste as good as you smell, please? Let me do that I really want to so bad baby, please?" You beg and I move my hands, then you look up at me saying "thank you"
then you look down "oh Johanna Johanna, what do we have here?" And I feel so expose with my leg over your shoulder open me up a little bit, the air hitting it making my clit hard and my pussy clenching around you "wow baby your pussy is so white around it.." you take out your finger opening my pussy with your middle and index finger of your right hand, and with the index finger of your left hand you circle my pussy "and so pink on the inside..." you say pressing your finger inside "and shaved, I didn't take you as a person to shave but im glad your proving me wrong, I love that you did shave or I wouldn't be looking at your beautiful bald pink pussy"
then your mouth is on me making me cry out, with your lips around my clit sucking it.. hard, my juices running down my leg, then you let go of my clit putting your tongue in my pussy, going around and around.. then you start trusting your tongue inside my pussy, going in and out.. around and around, wetting me even more, I can't possibly be more wet can I? But I don't have time to think about that, I just know your mouth and fingers feel so good
"fuck baby don't stop.. please don't stop" then you put your finger inside my pussy with your tongue going around and around my clit, trusting your finger in time with your tongue "please baby, please?" I beg I don't know for what, but you seem to know because just then you put another finger inside me "fuck!" Then you twist your fingers looking for something, and I think you find it because I squirt a little bit and you say "found it!" With a smirk on your face
"f fo found.. what?" I say panting
"your g-spot"
"is that what it was?"
"yes, that's why you squirted a little bit"
"oh well, it felt really good" I say blushing
"and I'm about to make you feel even better"
"well.. I guess I better get ready"
"oh yes baby, now be quiet and let do my job" then you start trusting your fingers faster and faster... and it feels so good
"oh fuuuck yeeesss! Please don't stop"
"I won't baby" and you keep pushing faster harder and faster..
"yes yes baby oh yeah" then you twist your fingers again, going in and out twisting and twisting... then you curl your fingers hitting my g-spot making a come on motion and that's when I feel it
"oh fuck"
"that's right baby.. feel it, feel it for me"
"oh mhmm! Im not a screamer but this makes me want to scream in pleasure"
"don't worry baby, I like it, I want you screaming when you come" in..out.in.out..twisting keeping the come on motion
"oh fuck baby..I I think I'm.. about to cum!"
"yeah baby, come baby cum for me" faster and faster
"fuck yes I'm cumming baby"
"yeah come baby, I want you to scream my name when you cum, cum!" And you saying that makes me come.. hard
"I'm cumming baby.. fuuck Rieeeellle Rielle" and you keep going making me cum so hard that I squirt all over your fingers, my body convulsing as if I was having a seizure
"that's right baby, clasp down on those fingers. Mhmm so tight I can't wait to fuck it good" somehow that makes my pussy keel clasping on your finger and I can't seem to stop "oh yeah tight.just.like.that" and I think I'm gonna come again
"oh fuck! Rielle... no please j just stop please.. I don't.. I I think I'm gonna come again" I didn't know my body could come so hard. And still be cumming, let alone want to come again with you talking like that
"oh yeah baby I feel it.. your pussy wants to come again.. I can feel it pulsing and becoming tighter around my fingers.. I didn't think you could come with me talking like that"
"oh please? I don't think I can take it anymore.. I don't want to come again.. oh fuck but my pussy does, I don't want to come so hard again but at the same time I want it.. my pussy wants it. Please?" I don't know what I'm begging for. But you make that decision for me
"and have it you should" then you start moving your fingers fast and hard again "I'm gonna make you come so hard you'll faint of pleasure"
"oh yeah baby, please? Make that pussy come.. make me come again"
"oh yes baby, I like how your pussy tights up like that!"
"and I love how you talk like that.. you make my pussy feel so good.. your fingers feel so good inside me, fucking me hard and fast" and you keep going faster "oh fuck! Just like that please? Just.like.that" I end up saying through gritted teeth
"oh yeah, you like how your girlfriend makes you feel?"
" oh yeah, I love it baby.. I love how you make me feel. Fucking me like that"
"and this is just the beginning baby, I'll make your pussy feel better later.. we are gonna fuck each other, I'll scissor you, then we are gonna do the 69 position where you'll get to pleasure my pussy too just how you want it"
"oh yeah baby, I'll make your pussy feel good too.. I want your pussy so bad, in my mouth, my tongue, my face, over me, under me. Everywhere baby"
"oh fuck baby now your just making me wanted now"
"yes Rielle I want you to wanted, I want to make your pussy wet, and make you come as hard as your making me come"
"mhmm baby you made my pussy wet a long time ago, and I can't wait. But right now all I want is make your pussy come again" and you keep going fast and hard, and I don't know how you can keep up is like you don't get tired.. and I feel it
"oh crap baby, im gonna come again get ready baby"
"oh yeah baby come baby, come"
"oh yeah baby, I'm cumming"
"give it to me baby give it to me good, give me.that.cum"
"oh fuck yes baby!"
you start trusting harder saying "this" trust "pussy" trust "is" trust "mine!" Trust "you hear me? Your pussy is mine and only mine" you say each word with a trust "tell me baby, this pussy is mine!"
"yes baby yours, only yours. Give it to me"
"yeah baby mine, come baby now" and you pinch my nipple making me come
"I'm cuuuummiing baby! Oh Rieeeeeeellle" and I come so hard I blank out.
Sometime later I open up my eyes, and I'm in a bed with you "what the heck was that?" I ask
"that baby was death by pleasure"
"wow that was amazing, if that's what it was then I want to die all the time" I say smiling "thank you"
"what for making you come?"
"yes baby" I say blushing
"and she still blushes, after what we done and you still blush?"
"yeah baby sorry"
"don't feel sorry baby, I like it... it makes you look innocent witch you still kind of are"
"anyway yes baby thank you for that, but not just that, thank you for making me feel good, for saying such kind words to me, and for loving me that way"
"baby you have nothing to thank me for, I did it because I wanted and because I love you, so so much it made not seem to you but I love you"
"I think I love you too"
"really?"
"yes really" and you kiss me hard and passionately
"oh Johanna, you have no idea how happy that makes me, thank you"
"don't thank me, just love me"
"oh I will baby"
"so what now?" I ask yawning
"now I think?... is time for you to take a nap"
"but.." I yawn "I want to make you feel good"
"oh don't worry baby you'll have plenty of time later, right now you need to rest and nap.. don't worry I'll still be here when you wake up"
"ok, love you Rielle"
"love you too Johanna" then just like that I fall asleep in your arms... To be continue.
so what do guys think? Should I continue or just stop here? Please let me know by commenting down below, and please let me know if you like it or hate it, love you guys :)
Ps. I'm sorry if I made mistakes in writing, I'm only human after all...or am I? Just kidding I am human, thank you :)
Submitted: September 26, 2014
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Like...OMG, that was HIGHLY descriptive, which is a MAJOR positive! I loved this, you do need to continue hun! Love you sis? MWAH!
Sat, September 27th, 2014 8:27pmI think you need to decide whether Johanna is telling the readers, what is happening, or whether she's telling Rielle? Look at how other people do the dialogue in 1st person POV. But otherwise very nice.
Mon, September 29th, 2014 6:14amLoved it! Got me all hot n stuff ;)
Sun, November 23rd, 2014 7:40amLoving it! I can't wait until they scissor!
Sun, December 21st, 2014 10:27amNice story, really enticing, and engrossing.
Though you might say it's your style, not following proper rules of punctuation, grammar and style is putting off.
Such style applies to poetry, and poets get away with it because of that poetic license they carry with them. It's not so in prose dude.
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Wow, that was certainly a nice piece of work. Normally I'm not into the gay thing but this was really hot. I don't know why you self doubt? Everyone has insecurities, but you should never doubt your work and your followers. You've earned them for a reason. Now I know I haven't read anything by you other than this, but I would never reject a request from a fellow author I'm just not like that. I know you read a lot from Icebreaker see her and I are close and I've read everything she wrote thus far and also commented on everything and I've gotten requests and I've done my share so please don't doubt. You want me to read stuff by just ask no rejection here. Now I'll look forward to hearing from you again. Much Love!!!! ;-)
Sat, September 27th, 2014 6:40amAnd it was beautiful by the way.
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Thank you, it's not that I'm doubting my followers it's just that I'm doubting if I did a good job, and thank you so much for not rejecting my request, you'll be hearing from me again definitely. Much love too ;) and thank you again :)
Sat, September 27th, 2014 10:15pm