When passion strikes, brace yourself
for there might be no tomorrows.
When passion strikes, cross yourself
for you might have been cursed.
When passion strikes, take care
because you will forget your fears
and trust your steps as never before,
seek encounters with the forbidden
laughing at the faces of Time and Death.
Submitted: September 30, 2020
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DampKitten
Like lightening out of the sky, girl!
Wed, September 30th, 2020 3:32amRepetition is your primary poetic element. I love the theme and the conclusion. I might have said "Laughing in the faces" but it's not that different. I think we've all be 'struck' and totally lost focus, just as you infer.
Really good...
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Thank you ,dearest Damp Kitten! Love, Lizzie.
Tue, September 29th, 2020 10:19pm