Submitted: February 24, 2020
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DampKitten
I love the personification of time here. You give time a 'God-like' authority over the events and relationship as if it were to assert judgement on its value. Of course, the true judgement is with the speaker and the participants, so the purpose of the piece is to imply the remarkable lack of control we feel as things are slipping away.
Mon, March 9th, 2020 3:15amAuthor
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Yes...we only have control over ourselves and that in the best cases. In others, we just struggle to keep sane. Accepting loss with dignity is an exercise in evolution,I guess.
Sun, March 15th, 2020 9:09amI love your reviews, Kitten, there´s a lot I learn about myself from them! Thank you!
Love, Lizzie.