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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Adult Romance  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

In a dimly lit chamber,

you wait for me,

wearing a black mask.

You sit and wait calmly,

as you know I will arrive.

I enter and look at you,

time has respected you,

hours have been kind,

life has nourished you

with unexpected tricks,

and odd surprises.

I just enter and feel

my clothes bother us both

I undress before you,

your eyes follow me,

behind the black mask.

waiting for me to get near.

I do so and I feel a jolt,

desire urges me forward,

I extend my trembling hands

and find myself caught 

in the iron circle of your arms.






Submitted: September 16, 2020

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Fantastic imagery and I love how you isolate this piece to such a minuscule moment. You don’t try to cover too much ground. This is so incredibly focused and specific. It’s the blink of an eye. I love the last line - the inference of willing imprisonment. That’s emphatic and perfect punctuation

Wed, September 16th, 2020 11:25pm


Wow, thank you so much,dearest Damp Kitten! Your reviews are superb and always offer great insight. Thank you! Love, Lizzie.

Thu, September 17th, 2020 8:34am

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