Lost

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Adult Romance  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group


Just lost in the broken crystals

of your corrosive absence,

just lost in the dried petals

that still scent some old book,

just lost in the city by the river,

just lost in its old,old streets,

just lost in the sounds of a tango,

just lost in the air of these skies,

just lost in memories of our time

and the present joy of your existence.


Submitted: December 24, 2019

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Amy F. Turner

No just about how passionate this is in every breath you breathe into this short piece that pacts a massive impact that's powerful. Beautiful how each word grips you. Thanks for sharing it, Lizzie. :)
Happy holidays to you!

Wed, December 25th, 2019 7:48am

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Dearest Amy, thank you so much! I am so glad my writing resonates with you. Happy holidays to you too! Love, Lizzie.

Wed, December 25th, 2019 1:26pm

DampKitten

I particularly love the imagery of rose petals in a book.
Great alliteration in the first two lines. I love repetition.
Back to the old city...

Fri, December 27th, 2019 4:46am

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I live in that city, Damp Kitten. Thanks for your great review, I am so happy you like my writing. Love, (lots) Lizzie,

Fri, December 27th, 2019 6:43am

DampKitten

Have you ever heard the song by Journey, "When the Lights go down in the City"? It's quite old, of course. I think it's the 80's channel that plays it. But I bet you'd like it.

Fri, December 27th, 2019 3:15pm

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I haven`t but I will, now I am curious about it! Thanks for your tip,dear Kitten! Love,Lizzie,

Fri, December 27th, 2019 1:07pm

Spyguy

But found to another lost soul, in a world of silence & imagination!

Mon, January 13th, 2020 9:01pm

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Maybe... Thanks for reading and commenting!

Sun, March 8th, 2020 10:16am

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