Desire.
Book by: Lizziewolf
Chapter1 (v.1) - Pre temps.
"You are here ,that is al that matters."
Desire.
Episode 1.
He made her sit on his lap, with her back to him.
"Open up, that's better, keep your rhythm, up and down, do not stop."
The woman posed on his cock was too far gone into her excitement to discuss his orders. His hands went to her upright breasts and began twisting her nipples viciously.
Thus impaled,feeling pain and pleasure at the same time, egged on by his words of lust she came violently. She was still convulsing when he pushed her onto the carpet, to remain there ,
on her knees and elbows with her legs open and her ass cheeks in the air. He entered her tight asshole with a strong thrust .Her cries did not deter him from keeping a steady rythm
which he kept till he reached his climax and she collapsed in exhaustion.
He stood up and went to his kitchen to get a drink.It was good to have her around,she was so eager to please him.
He would have to get her an anal plug,he would feel more comfortable if she were more open.She would feel better too but that was secondary to him.The thought of it made him so hot he returned to
the room to find her stlll on the carpet,waiting for him.
"Get up and then kneel.You will give me your mouth ,I want to be present in every part of your body i can use for my pleasure."
He filled her mouth completely,getting to the base of her throat and making her gag.He let her breathe for a second and then went on,in and out till he exploded .His cum tasted sweet,she needed no
prompt to swallow it greedily
He let her drop to the carpet and went to a small bar in the corner of the room. Without asking, he poured a glass of wine and brought it to her. He also brought one for himself. Both sipped their drinks in silence.Had she been another kind of woman he would have drunk his wine off her body,had he been another kind of man she would have done the same. But something kept them studying each other while letting the rich taste of Burgundy warm their palates.
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Unlike the other readers i can't leave without saying how absolutely hot this was
You are going to give Benawriter a heart attack if he reads this gem of a story.
XoxoX Ron
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I love this review!I hope not to give anyone a heart attack,I aim at the mind and lower parts!
Thanks for your words and brace yourself for what is coming!Lizzie.
There is a strange bond or relationship here, she being obviously a devoted sub, he an understanding Dom. At first I felt sorry for her but then realized this was what she wanted. Decadent and arousing; nicely done.
(And thanks, Ron, for the "heads up" - this was well worth checking out.)
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Thanks for your words!I am glad to see I am getting my message clear...what you say is exactly what I had in mind.Lizzie.
I like the isolated window this piece provides....not a ton of explanation or extraneous props. There is a certain lewdness about these two. They use each other. I like the air of sub and dom this provides. She seems very eager, no matter what he expects. It's arousing...
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That was the idea...thanks for your words!Lizzie.
I love the directness of this from the very beginning. There's no need for background, location, description...it's quickly very clear that this is a BDSM tale, and a very good one. It's clear you know the lifestyle, your lack of flowery speech, the clear direction, the balance of pleasure and pain, the trust of the sub who ultimately has the power - something not often recognised - a sub chooses their role and gives over control, it isn't taken (something writers without the personal knowledge often fail to observe and it becomes abusive and uncomfortable reading).
Really like this Lizziewolf...onto Chapter 2... X
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Thank you so much for your words! I am so glad you like my writing.Lizzie.
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