Beauty

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group


 
 
And I saw her and then I knew
everything was right.
The circle closed and opened again
completion and freedom
both surrendered us to light.


Submitted: October 26, 2020

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Amy F. Turner

This short piece is romantic but leaves me wanting more. What else can be done in the light?

Mon, October 26th, 2020 7:26pm

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I guess lots of things but this is what this woman inspired, something lofty and purely platonic.
Thanks for your words, Amy! Love, Lizzie.

Mon, October 26th, 2020 1:28pm

DampKitten

Vague, succinct, loaded with symbolism and imagery.
I like short powerful pieces

Tue, October 27th, 2020 1:29am

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I am glad you liked it.Thanks for your words, love, Lizzie.

Wed, October 28th, 2020 11:30am

Spyguy

This was well written!

Wed, October 28th, 2020 8:38am

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Thank you! Love, Lizzie.

Wed, October 28th, 2020 11:29am

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