The Horney Chef

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: General Erotica  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Erotica

I haven't written anything before any comments would be helpful

My fiance and I were going through a rough patch in our relationship. We have been together for 8 years and worked together for a while until I was fired from my job. It took a toll on our relationship and we started arguing a lot. After about a month of searching I found a boring job as a waitress, or so I thought.

I started my first day counting tills, seeing up learning the ropes like you would do on the first day. I had to go down stairs to the kitchen to get some items from the storage area. I was looking in a walk in cupboard when from behind me I felt someone's arms come around my waist. Someone started to kiss my neck (it's my biggest weak spot). My legs gave out and if he had not been holding me I would have hit the floor. Just then my team member came iand  said "Leave her alone; you can't even give her a day to settle in!"

He tried to grab her and kiss her and she pushed him away, so I thought, "World's biggest flirt, right?"

He did it to everyone but I gave up on trying to stop him because when I tried it only encouraged him even more. I found out his name was Harry. 

I went upstairs from where I was working to look for some salad that he said was up there. I went into the walk-in fridge. When I turned around he was right in front of me and it made me jump. He just grabbed me and kissed me passionately. I felt out of order because my relationship wasn't going right so it made me feel a bit better about myself. At the same time he grinded himself against me and I could feel his huge rock hard cock against me. Oh, my God, even through clothes it felt good. 

I heard the kitchen door open and we broke apart. My manager had come to look for me because I was gone for a while. He said he had come up to help me find it and asked if there was anything else we needed. 

"I don't think so," I said.

But my manager wasn't stupid and she just glared at me; she was so bitter. Some of us thought she wasn't getting any. We all laughed. I found out a couple of days later that she swings the other way so all jokes stopped.

A week later, Harry caught me in the kitchen. He kissed me and put his hands down my trousers and started to finger me. I was so wet and horny that I didn't care where I was. I felt his hard cock and I got it out of his trousers. Oh my God he was huge, at least 9 or 10 inches and that just made me wetter. I was stroking his cock and someone came in again. I was truly frustrated by then but we were at work. We both had the next day off and arranged to meet then.

We met the next day on a quiet street where no one knew us and went to a quiet park. We found an abandoned building and he pulled me inside. We started kissing, running our hands over each other's body. He put his hand down my trousers and into my pussy fingering me while I had his cock in my hand. He turned me around. bent me over and took my trousers down. He fucked me from behind and it felt so good with his cock deep inside me. He fucked me good and hard and I was about to cum but he put his arm around so he could rub my clit and I don't think I have ever cum that hard in my life. 


Submitted: August 04, 2020

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benawriter

There you go, a good start to describing the relationships so far.

Tue, August 4th, 2020 11:08pm

Author
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Thanks for the help so far Ben xx

Tue, August 4th, 2020 4:25pm

Dick Wood

Were you thinking of Gordon Ramsey when you wrote this?

Wed, August 5th, 2020 3:19am

Author
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No I wasnt but I wouldn't of said no to him lol.

Tue, August 4th, 2020 11:33pm

Storywriterx

Loved this. Can I use your oven. I've got something I want you to help me cook.
XoxoX SWx

Wed, August 5th, 2020 3:36am

Author
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You can use my oven any time Ron thanks lol xx

Tue, August 4th, 2020 11:35pm

Spyguy

Careful putting too many buns in that oven, you might just have another mouth to feed soon!

Wed, August 5th, 2020 8:53am

Author
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I already have 2 lol

Wed, August 5th, 2020 2:33am

Spyguy

Little miracles are so precious!!! Well, you can mentally enjoy the pastry basting that this particular bun baster would lovingly spray all over the insides of your beloved oven!!!

Wed, August 5th, 2020 6:24pm

Author
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They are my partners children and they are precious.

Thu, August 6th, 2020 12:50am

Kitty Hall

Very good for a first story. :)

Wed, August 5th, 2020 9:05pm

Author
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Thank you

Thu, August 6th, 2020 12:52am

DampKitten

Oh, how fun!!! Well, you know I love an illicit affair, Lisa. Very hot!
Harry frightens me a little because he's so 'forward'. If I had a stranger walk up behind me at work, put his arm around me and start kissing my neck, I'm afraid he might not be able to have children after that. I'm more into the shy guys or the 'friendly' guys who let things develop over time. That's not to say I don't love the 'beautiful stranger' concept, but I prefer to at least face them head on at first.

So, this type of writing is referred to as 'narrative'. That means the author is doing most if not all of the talking. This is 'first person narrative' because the author is telling the story from her point of view and she is the protagonist (the main participant). I actually like first person narrative more than 3rd person omniscient because, as a reader, I develop a quicker and stronger bond to the character.

Ben is giving you advice? He's a fantastic writer.

What I want to see as you develop your writing is more dialogue and personal interaction. I often tell people to let the story tell itself. By that I simply mean for you to focus on describing events and locations along with providing dialogue rather than giving in depth explanations and insight. When you do it that way, your story becomes longer but more detailed. For example, your first paragraph is an explanation of a social situation that exists between the speaker and her husband presented as a summary of events and circumstances. It's a lecture, so to speak.

As an alternative, you could start your story with dialogue between the husband and wife which actually provides all this information as they speak to each other. Why do it that way? Because it puts your reader in the room. It draws your reader closer. It's not a lecture...it's an account. It's a movie.

I love the abandoned building sex, but wow....that's dangerous (and you make it sound thoughtless). I mean, the speaker just met this guy. She's gonna let him take her to an abandoned building??? Lights and Sirens on that!!! You can play this scene. It really should be at least a little unsettling to the speaker - you get my drift? I would at least give this situation a softly concerning air. It would make the sex even hotter. Fear is an aphrodisiac. This guy could be a serial killer for all she knows. He acts crazy at the office, walking around accosting all the women. I'm not saying that women don't drop their guard for this kind of guy, but it's how you end up on those murder mystery shows.

So anyway, those are the things that come to mind when I read this. I think it's exciting that you are writing at last!!! Explore your fantasies in your stories. That's what people around here do. It brings out the detail in your writing...

Thu, August 6th, 2020 3:05am

Author
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Thanks you give me alot of ideas. Ben helped me alot with how spacing helps, should I said edited it for me with a few helpful tips as well.

Thu, August 6th, 2020 12:56am

VanillaEssence

nice.
easy to read too.
that horny chef knew his stuff.
who dares wins.

Tue, August 11th, 2020 11:33pm

Author
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Lol thanks.

Wed, August 12th, 2020 5:07am

puellalove

A this quick turn on means this is a good story :))

Fri, July 23rd, 2021 11:05pm

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