Slippery fun in the sun

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: General Erotica  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Sun bathing with a dirty twist....

Ella lay back and tried to ignore her steaming hangover as she enjoyed the warm sun on her milky skin. The dark shade of blue of her bikini makes her look even paler. She is what is known as an English rose back home, but she doesn’t feel as elegant as the name portrays. A true Brit abroad as her freckles gave her that holiday sun kissed look that she always starts off with and she is determined to leave Marbella as a bronzed goddess. Much like the beautiful girls around her. All of whom look as though they have just stepped off a catwalk.

She scanned the pool and sipped her cocktail as she eyed the number of holiday makers enjoying the beautiful weather. That is when she saw him. Possibly the most gorgeous man she has ever seen. He has the attention of everyone as he sits at the edge of the pool, centre stage. She licked her lips as the droplets of water ran down his toned chest and wished she could lick up every running droplet on every delicious muscle. 

He smiled over and she can feel her face going as red as her hair. Surely he isn’t smiling at her. She has come over all unnecessary as he seems to watch her, dare she think it, admiringly. He seems to be eyeing her intently and she looked around to see if there was a real stunner behind her, but there is no one. She smiled back timidly and it seemed to be an invitation to him as he stood up and made his way over.

She panicked and decided to busy herself by grabbing the sun cream and turning to face the other way. No way is this guy going to like her and if by some miracle he actually speaks to her, then her goofy charms will surely defeat any chance she has with him. It never fails her normally.

She squeezed a dollop of lotion onto her arm foolishly and scolded herself for not paying attention. She started to wipe parts off and scatter droplets all over her body. Now she is a total mess. She held her cream filled hands out feeling like a total moron before a voice appeared as if from nowhere.

“Allow me…” her sexy pool crush kneeled in front of her and rubbed his hands over hers taking the excess cream with them. He instructed her to lie back and she did as she was told without question. As if she was ever going to argue.

He pulled her arm out and stroked the cream along her Goosebumps making her shiver all over. The people around her disappeared as he kneaded the cream into her hand with the sexiest smile on his face. “Turn over…” he ordered and she was flipped on the lounger before she knew it. Clearly her body had taken over and her mind was useless now.

She almost died as he started on her legs. He massaged her feet and worked his way up, spreading the cream as he did. It was the most arousing moment of her life. The feel of his creamy fingers on her skin is almost electric and sends a shock directly to the most intimate part of her. No doubt about it, she is wet. Soaking in fact and probably looks like she has been for a dip in the pool, it certainly feels like it.

She felt his fingers become firmer as he rubbed her upper legs giving extra special attention to her inner thighs. Ella’s breathing hitched when she felt his fingertips push under her bottoms and grope her arse. She melted at the sensation. She bit her lip and suddenly became conscious of the people just a few feet away. She heard her torturer chuckling as she shuffled nervously in the lounger. She swallowed hard when he undid the drawstring of her bikini letting it fall beneath her.

The excitement whirled around inside her as his hands stroked her back in circular motions. Every muscle was practically singing to his heavenly tune and she was totally at his mercy. She arched her back as his hands travelled to her front and cupped both of her perky breasts greedily. She felt his warm breath by her ear then as he lowered himself down to her level.

“Let’s see how long you can hold out before I’ve got you screaming in front of this lot…” he whispered huskily with a smirk in his tone.

“Why…” was all she could manage as her speech left her again when he licked her lobe before nibbling on it. He fondled her breasts and tweaked her hard nipples making her quiver between her thighs. Who is this God? This devilish creature determined to torture her into sexual submission in front of the whole pool. She heard him chuckle again and hated him as much as she wanted him. The dampness between her legs doesn’t lie.

He worked his way back down towards her bottoms and she almost gulped in anticipation. She stole a quick glance either side of her and is glad to see that one side is now vacant and the other is a young sun worshipper in a deep trance as they take in the rays with their I-pod. The sight of their head phones brings on some much needed relief.

All thoughts were lost as his hands began to grope her arse again and separate her cheeks making the juices flow from her opening. She felt his thumb slip inside her bottoms and she wanted to panic, to squirm away, but she couldn’t. The feel of his thumb tracing a line down from her tight arse passed her sloppy opening to her swollen clit was blissful agony. A small moan escaped and she bit her lip as he slipped his finger deep inside her.

“Christ you’re wet! I’m about to finger fuck you so hard babe…” he said sounding almost breathless himself. True to his word he started his magic with his fingers making her squeeze the towel beneath her even harder. The feeling was exquisite and she closed her eyes to enjoy it. Fuck everyone else.

She started to pant as he picked up the pace and plunged inside her deeper. He used the other hand to grope her cheek making her cry out in delight. She started to push against him and they soon found their rhythm together. She felt his other hand move to strum her clit and she bit down harder on her lip to keep the moan from escaping. She can’t let him win, but he’s putting up a damn good fight.

“Come on babe let me hear it…” he ordered as he pushed into her with his juice covered fingers and then without warning she felt his thumb pressing against her arsehole. The sensation was unlike anything she has ever felt before and she started to really lose it. She bucked against his hand and buried her face in the towel as the heat pulsed through her. The tip entered her tight hole and she started to moan loudly into the towel and hoped that the rough fabric muffled the sound. The fullness was overwhelming and she pushed against him wanting more inside her. She was on the edge and every delightful sweep inside her finally pushed her over. She released and her juices poured out of her making him chuckle. She felt him peck her arse cheekily with his gorgeous lips before he stood up.

Ella turned to see him stood looking just as dreamy as before. The erection still solid in his shorts and unsurprisingly enough, he seems uncaring of the people around him. She desperately wanted him, wanted to taste every drop of him and she went to sit up before remembering her top was off. It was a wonder to her about being so bashful over getting her tits out when she has just squirted in front of the entire hotel, but she will always be a timid creature. He turned to leave looking very pleased with himself.

“Wait….will I see you again?” she asked and he turned back giving her that perfect grin. He opened his mouth to speak, but it was muted. She couldn’t understand it. What the hell is going on? She asked him to repeat it and he did, but there was still no sound coming out of his mouth.

She jolted suddenly and everything was different. She was now on her front, bikini top on, drink in hand and staring straight at her crush sat across the pool. She was open mouthed, completely speechless as he splashed around in the water with his mates.
It hit her then. A mixture of her drunken antics the night before and the scorching sun caused sleep to take her instead of her Adonis. The disappointment was overwhelming and she sipped her cocktail as she stared at him. It had felt so real and she pacified herself with the fact that he might not know she exists, but in her mind they will always have their moment of slippery fun in the sun.

Submitted: May 09, 2015

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Oooh love it, nothing like letting a fantasy take you away.

Sat, May 9th, 2015 6:57pm


Exactly!! Just thought I'd have a little fun

Sat, May 9th, 2015 12:02pm

Jenny Jones

I like it :)

Sat, May 9th, 2015 8:36pm


Thanks so much!!! Just felt like playing with an idea glad you liked it

Sat, May 9th, 2015 1:47pm

Krystal Clear

Laura, put a great twist intro this. As always, your writing is vivid and entertaining. ~Krystal .....[A fire has been lit....stay tuned]

Sat, May 9th, 2015 10:16pm


Thanks huni it was my first short piece so that's music to my ears

Sat, May 9th, 2015 10:18pm


That was hotter than the Arizona sun! Well done...

Sun, May 10th, 2015 7:33am


Haha thanks so much!! Still getting used to writing this sort of stuff :)

Sun, May 10th, 2015 1:47am


Goodness that was excellent. Sooooo well written and I could almost feel the disappointment at the end


Sun, May 10th, 2015 9:36pm


Wow thanks appreciate it :)

Sun, May 10th, 2015 9:03pm

Alyson Williams

This was fantastic. I have taken to reading more short stories lately due to limited time...and you sure offered up a great one here! Hope you write more soon.

Tue, May 12th, 2015 2:22pm


Thanks Aly means a lot. I'm still working on my more erotic writing and this was my first short story. I'll definitely be working on more in the future. Thanks for commenting huni

Tue, May 12th, 2015 7:50am


What you you . Why did it have to be a dream. I was on the verge of... You just spoiled it. Great writing as always. Love Sam.

Tue, May 12th, 2015 4:55pm


This made me chuckle :D thanks for reading huni

Tue, May 12th, 2015 10:24am


If this was a dream you can write one hell of a fantastic chapter based on reality! This was fun!

Fri, May 15th, 2015 12:06pm


hahaha thanks if only sunbathing could really be this fun :)

Fri, May 15th, 2015 5:49am


I'm sure that sunbathing could be that fun if you just engineered it to be... I, for one, love administering suntan lotion!

Mon, June 22nd, 2015 8:56pm


Who doesn't? Lol it's a seductive art form :)

Mon, June 22nd, 2015 9:21pm


Ha,that poor girl. Why did it have to b a daydream? Darn it !! ????

Tue, June 23rd, 2015 11:03am



Tue, June 23rd, 2015 4:17am


This was Damn good for your first short story and pretty new to writing erotica. Nothing like a fantasy except the real thing. Though you had me wishing it was for real just like the girl. Great job!

Mon, September 21st, 2015 11:52am


Aww thanks Hun means a lot

Tue, September 22nd, 2015 8:18am


I could almost feel my hands on her the way yo built the story. Quite aroused now by it. Well done.

Wed, December 23rd, 2015 11:48am


This ones a big tease isn't it. I'm glad it had the desired effect ;)

Wed, December 23rd, 2015 5:26am

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