STOOD UP part 3

STOOD UP    part 3

Status: Finished

Genre: Erotica


Status: Finished

Genre: Erotica


chance meeting


chance meeting


Submitted: July 29, 2015

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Submitted: July 29, 2015



STOOD UPpart 3


The next morning there was a knock at Vicki’s door at 545am, she had already taken her shower since she always woke at 500am. She had packed her backpack and put it on her shoulder and headed down stairs, Pam and Sherrie were in the kitchen.


“Good morning, did you sleep well Vicki. Breakfast will be ready in a few minutes. The guys are out on the back porch if you want to join them.”


“Yes, wonderful. May I have a cup of coffee?”


“Sure, cups are in the cabinet above the coffeemaker.” Vicki reached in and got a pink cup and poured her coffee. She headed for the porch.


“Oh, it is beautiful this morning. So crisp, I can see the sun about to rise.”


“As soon as we eat, we are going to ride to the cave they found.” Mike said.


 “I have my bag packed and ready Mike.” Vicki smiled coyly and quickly looked down, avoiding his eyes.

Mike questioned to himself what that was about.


“Breakfast is ready, come on in.” the girls said.


After breakfast we road out a gravel road next to the lake and came to rock formation that hung out over the lake….the cave.  The guys had hung ropes down from above to get inside previously. Since the cave opened to the east, the cave was brightened so we would not need flashlights to search it.  There was a few drawing inside and hundreds of spider webs.  I HATE SPIDERS, but I wasn’t going to spoil the moment for the guy’s discovery of the cave.  And of course, who got bite by one?  ME!!! By a Brown Recluse no less!  A few minutes into the cave and I was sick at my stomach and my leg was really hurting. It had crawled up my pants leg and bitten me on the upper thigh.  By the time we got back to the cabin, the upper part of my leg was red and very hot and swollen. Mike felt terrible that it had happened to me and was blaming himself. We rode back on the bikes and when we got back, he picked me up and carried me into the cabin.

I told him I was fine and it was ok, that Spiders loved me.


A couple of days later I had to go to the emergency room and get my leg attended to, as I could barely walk.  They gave me steroids and said I would probably need surgery in a couple of weeks after the doctors found out how much damage was done.  I had to take time off from the hospital too. Mike checked on me everyday and either brought me dinner or fixed it for me.  I told him not to make such a fuss, but he would not listen.

The day of the surgery he took me to the hospital and stayed with me until I was better.

He said it was his entire fault and was very sorry he had hurt me. 


“I would never do anything to intentionally hurt you. Vicki.”


“Mike you had nothing to do with this. It just happened.” I said.


“You will need to walk and stretch you leg everyday so the muscles will work again.

Maybe climb you stairs a lot.”


“Mike I am a nurse, I think I will know what to do to get the strength back. I will walk, climb my stairs and ride my bike.”


“I was hoping to take you to the Cavalry Ball next month, but that might be too soon for your recovery.”


“Cavalry Ball?  I have never been to one.”


“You will love it.”



A few days later when he call I said,

“I found the perfect dress for the Ball. I hope it is not too much.”

It was a long bright blue cage back dress. I would only need to shorten it.


“I am sure whatever you found you will be the most beautiful women there. How is your leg?  Do you think you will be able to stand on it for a while or dance maybe?”


“Mike, I am getting around better everyday as you know. I go back to work in the morning. If I can work I can stand or dance. Okay?”



The night of the Cavalry Ball Mike got to her house a few minutes early.


He looked so handsome in his dress blues.

He told my hand and looked at me straight into my eyes.

Then he got down on his knee and held a blue box in his hand, opened it and there was a beautiful blue sapphire and diamond ring. 

“Would you do me the honor of marrying me Vicki?



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