That One Guy

That One Guy That One Guy

Status: Finished

Genre: Erotica


Status: Finished

Genre: Erotica


This story is about a guy named Justin who is 21, a virgin and has never had any sexual interaction with anyone even a kiss. This is the first part of the novel that I am writing I know there is no erotica, yet. But I just wanted to get some comments about the story and writing so far. Thanks!


This story is about a guy named Justin who is 21, a virgin and has never had any sexual interaction with anyone even a kiss.

This is the first part of the novel that I am writing I know there is no erotica, yet. But I just wanted to get some comments about the story and writing so far. Thanks!

Chapter1 (v.1) - That One Guy - Part 1

Author Chapter Note

This story is about a guy named Justin who is 21, a virgin and has never had any sexual interaction with anyone even a kiss.<br /> <br /> This is the first part of the novel that I am writing I know there is no erotica, yet. But I just wanted to get some comments about the story and writing so far. Thanks!

Chapter Content - ver.1

Submitted: November 16, 2015

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Chapter Content - ver.1

Submitted: November 16, 2015



Have you ever had that feeling in your life that you’re missing out on something?  Well, I get that feeling all the time, I’m sitting down alone at a bar and I see people walking around me getting drunk and walking out with people they didn’t come with.  I just feel like I can’t be one of these guys who are able to come in here and by the end of the night go home with a girl and have a one-night stand.


I just turned 21 a month ago and I’ve never had a girlfriend, never had sex, and, surprisingly, never kissed anyone.  I don’t know if it’s because I get nervous around people I just meet or if it’s because I’m ugly.  But, when I look in the mirror I don’t think of myself as ugly.  I’m 5’11” half white and half Asian, I work out so it’s not like I’m fat, actually I’m the opposite my closest friends usually call me ‘Harry Potter’. 


After sitting here for three hours the bartender is starting to give me the eye he usually does around this time, letting me know that I either have to buy a drink or leave.  To be fair to him, I have been sitting here with the same beer that I ordered when I first sat down.  So, I decide it’s time to while I’m walking out the door I hear someone yell, “Justin, hold up!”  Before I even turn around I know who it’s going to be, Titus my roommate.  Sure enough I turn around and it’s him walking up with a girl on his arm.


Now, I am not dissing on him by saying he is a total whore, any pussy he can find, he’ll take.We’ve known each other since 7th grade, he can sometimes be a douche but I love him, he’s my one and true only friend that I have never fought with ,yet. 


“Hey wassup” I reply, damn did I just slur?  Hmm, must be a little more drunk than I thought.  “Justin, I just wanted to let you know I’m throwing a party at the apartment again tonight, so if you don’t want to come back tonight here’s $400 go rent a hotel room.”  He hands me $400 and I take it and tell him “Ok, but you better clean up this time I don’t want to see cum all over the living room.”  I’m not too sure he heard me because right after he handed me the money he walked right out the door.


I’m standing there thinking of what to do, but my mind is all fogged up.  Oh did I forget to mention I am a light-weight, only 130 pounds, and I get drunk fast.  So, I decide to walk outside and find a hotel.  I think I bump into three strangers before I make it to the crosswalk.  While I’m walking, I hear a horn and see a bright light,  and all of a sudden I’m on the ground.  The last thing I remember seeing was the most beautiful face I have ever seen in my entire life.  Thinking she was an angel I whispered, “Take me.”


I wake up to soft snoring and light beeping, in the middle of the night, or at least I think it’s the middle of the night.  I see lights on a heart monitor machine and some IV connected to my wrist.  I look around and know that I’m in a hospital I can see people walking outside and of course the heart monitor pretty much gave it away.


I still hear the soft snoring and I’m wondering where it’s coming from, I look over to my right and see the angel that I saw right before I blacked out.  I shake my head, no it wasn’t an angel it was her.  I look at her beautiful face sleeping on a chair right next to me sleeping.  Even in the dim light I can see how dishelved she looks and I wonder why she’s here.


No time for that I tell myself.  Out of nowhere I get a sudden urge to pee, there is a bathroom right on the other side of the room.  I decide to pull out the IV, but right before I do I stop the flow of it.  I sit up, and start feeling dizzy I decide to stay seated on the bed for a bit longer.  After about five minutes when my mind starts slowing down I stand up.  I start walking and I trip on one of those portable food tables.  The table tips over and hits the ground making a loud bang.


I get down on my hands and knees to pick it up while I’m trying to get my head to stop spinning and pick it up I feel a slight breeze and hear footsteps behind me.  I look behind me and the girl who I saw sleeping in the chair is behind me with a strange look on her face, and I realize I’m in a hospital gown, naked underneath, with my bum sticking up to her.


As soon as I realize this I turn to face her, she still has a weird look on her face when she asks “Do you need help with that?”  I stutter for a couple of seconds before I reply “Yes”.  So she helps me pick up the table and put it back upright.  “What are you even doing up?” she asks.  I look at her with fascination, why is she even here? I ask myself.  So, it’s a few awkward seconds before I answer “I had to use the restroom.” 


Understanding dawns on her face she asks if I would want her to call the nurse and I agree.  So, she walks back to the bed and on the left side presses the nurse button.  While she’s doing that I mentally beat myself ‘Idiot, idiot’. 


After about a minute, a nurse walks and turns on the light, she looks at me and like a mom scolds me “You shouldn’t be up and walking.”  I reply “But, I had to go to the restroom.”  So she tells me go ahead and since I’m still a bit dizzy she helps me inside.  I close the door and look at myself, I can clearly see I’m red all the way to the tip of my ears.


Once I’m done with the restroom I walk out, to find the nurse gone and the beautiful girl sitting in the chair I saw her sleeping on.  I walk back to the bed and lie back down, but I raise it up so it’s like I’m sitting.  I look over to the girl and ask “So, what happened?”  It’s a minute before she looks up, with guilt all over her face and says “I ran you over with my car!”, and starts crying out of nowhere.


I have no idea what to do with this, so I just do what first comes to my mind and put my hand on her knee.  As soon as I do this, she uncovers her face to look at me.  I ask her “Am I alive?”  She answers, “Yes”.  “Then I will heal and this will be nothing but a memory.”


It turns out I was out for only three hours, and I only had to bruised ribs.  I found out the beautiful girl’s name is Sarah, what a beautiful a suiting name for her.  It turns out she also goes to NYU or New York University.  While she was telling me this I couldn’t believe that I haven’t seen her around the college.  We talked for hours that night asking each other questions, answering them and just laughing about how close our lives were but never meeting each other.  She also, lives in the apartment building right next to mines, and she lives with her best friend Hannah.


I was able to get her number and we texted all day and in the night we would talk for at least an hour about everything going on in our lives.  It took about a month for me to heal up completely and start going back to normal but nothing was normal after that night.


I started hanging out with Sarah more than Titus, which has never happened to me before never.  It took me about another month before I worked up the courage to ask her out. 


I’m pacing around in my living room with Titus watching me in fascination.  “What the fuck are you doing? Your blocking my TV.”  I pause and look I was pacing right in front of his view of the TV.  “I don’t know” I reply.  “What if I mess up our friendship by asking her out?”  He stands up and shoves me out the door and tells me “Don’t come back till you ask her out.” 


So, I decide to just go and do it.  I’m standing right in front of apartment number 32A, Sarah’s number.  I knock on the door three times Hannah opens it and yells “Sarah it’s for you!”  She opens the door to let me in.  I’m sitting on the couch nervous as hell, when I hear “Hey Justin.”  I get up and turn around and stop in my tracks.  The most beautiful creature stands in front of me, wearing one of those sweaters with a large neck hole which slides down one shoulder and yoga shorts. 


Why didn’t you just call her rather than coming down here!!! I think to myself.  “Hey Sarah, I was just wondering if we could talk?”  “You’re talking right NOW! And every other night!” Hannah replies annoyed.  I feel heat creeping up my cheeks I just hope no one can see it.  “Shut up Hannah” Sarah replies.  She then looks at me and says “sure let’s go on the roof.”


While walking up to the roof we make some small talk, such as the weather and school.  We sit down on our chairs, I take a deep breath and try to mentally encourage myself You got this!  “Sarah I need to tell you something” I say with more courage than I thought I had, I guess getting to know someone as much as we had makes it a whole lot easier.


She looks at me with a, cute, curious look “You know you can tell me anything.” She replies


“Ever since you hit me- “, “That wasn’t my fault! You walked right infront of my car!” she exclaims, throwing up her hands.


I grab her hands, “I know, but try not to interrupt me until I can say everything I need to say ok?” 


She nods her head.


“Ok, so once you hit me the last thing I saw was your beautiful face jumping out of the car and running to check on me.  And right then I knew, I needed to know you.  Now that we have finally gotten to know each other, my feelings have grown from a hot girl crush to somewhere just shy of love.  I would really like it if we could go on a date and see where it goes from there.  And not one of those friend dates we have been on, but an actual date?”


She has a shocked look on her face, but slowly a smile creeps up on her beautiful face until she’s completely smiling. “Took you long enough!” she exclaims.  She jumps up and walks to the door to lead back into the apartment building, “I’ll see you tomorrow night at 7 then.” She says looking back at me then enters the door and slams it shut.


I’m just sitting there wondering what just happened.  Feeling both excited and nervous, but mostly nervous.



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