Another bad sad poem

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Random poem I wrote.

I can see at night

But better in light.

For my friends are with me during the day

But at night they slip away.

At night they sleep

So during the day they can leap

With energy renewed

For the day anew.

Submitted: February 18, 2015

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Quil McKay

A.) this poem is MUCH more hopeful than the last one so its not really 'another' sad poem.
B.) I would have gone with a dif name - ex: Daytime Friends
C.) Dont knock ur own work (that's ur readers job - bitter laugh), it gives the impression that u didn't try when I seriously doubt that's true.

~Quil McBossy

Sat, February 21st, 2015 2:30am


I just didn't feel like making a title and I really don't try to write poems. It just happens.

Fri, February 20th, 2015 7:36pm

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