Submitted: May 11, 2015
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I really like this. It's hot, dark, and forbidding. At times I've had the same problem and I couldn't help myself checking out some attractive woman or guy. This is really good. I hope you can check my new story called the Exhibition. It's hot, wild, dark, and plenty of kinky sex. Feel free to leave a comment on it.
Mon, May 11th, 2015 2:29pmI enjoyed the premise of this poem. A true dichotomy! A few errors made it a bit rough to read (All I's are capitalized). You have great potential - keep writing and keep growing!
Mon, May 11th, 2015 4:12pmEveryone should go to church more often. why didn't I think of this before. Nice poem
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Hard to be spiritual when you're hard to be horny, huh?
Mon, May 11th, 2015 6:09am