Author's Note: For those who read my other novel called sex toy, this novel isn't about the sex addict. I have to put that off for a little bit. This story I've been wanting to write for the longest but I never knew how to start it off. But I finally wrote it. So here's chapter 1.
Chapter 1: Stolen
It was around midnight when I left my house. Me and my stepmother just had a huge argument. I wanted to like her. I really did for my dad but me and her just didn't get along. It wasn't my fault either. If she wasn't such a bitch, she'd earn my respect. First thing she did as soon as she moved in was take down all the pictures of my mother who died.
I asked her if I could at least put all my mother's pictures in my room and she said no and threw them away. And my dad just stood there saying nothing. I wiped away the tears that came down. I had my book bag securely on my back. It was filled with clothes. I guess I can ask my friend, Jasmine, if I could stay with her for a few days. It should be harmless enough.
A black car suddenly stopped beside me. I only stopped walking mometarily. Deliberating what I should do. I snapped back to reality and began walking again. The car slowly followed me. I sighed. I was already upset and irritated and now whoever this was was pissing me off more. It suddenly stopped and I heard a car door open. Just ignore it, Haley. It's okay. I suddenly felt a hand over my mouth and somebody pulling me back. I screamed as loud as I could but my screams were being muffled. I kicked and screamed. Whoever it was that had me, forced me into the backseat of the car with another man. The man looked at me and smiled. "Hello, sweetheart." He whispered. Fear ran over my whole body. I couldn't even talk. The car sped off. I unlocked the door and began reaching for the handle but the man that was in the backseat of the car with me grabbed my arms and held me down to the seat. His lips rested on mine. I bit his lip with my teeth and he pulled back, raised his fist and punched me hard in my face. That's when everything went black.
When I woke up the next morning, I was in a room. It was a bedroom. It was sunny outside. The room I was in had a huge bed with gold and red sheet covering it. Everything looked elegant and expensive. I immediatley got up remembering the event that took place last night. My cheek was slightly sore but I ignored it.
I got up and went up to the first door I saw and forced it open. There was the man from the backseat last night. He was beautiful. He had dark green eyes. Black hair. His skin was smooth and the color of Ivory. He had on an all black suit and a smirk on his face. "Going somewhere?" He asked. I backed up back into the room. He walked into the room with me and closed the door and locked it. "Sit on the bed." I didn't obey him. I wasn't his fucking slave. "No." I said. His smile grew wider. "Have you ever been tied to a bed before?" I shook my head. "Want to be?" I shook my head again.
"Then sit the fuck down." He demanded. I slowly walked over and sat onto the bed. He walked in front of me and looked down at me. "What's your name?" He asked. I could feel tears coming to my eyes. I was scared to death. "Haley." I whispered. He nodded once. "Haley what?" I bit down on my lip. "Haley Robinson." He smiled and grabbed a piece of my hair and twirled it in his fingers. "How old are you Haley?"
"Sixteen." I answered. He got down on his knees in front of me. His hands rested on my thighs and they trailed up to my waist. "Are you a virgin?" He asked. Why would he want to know that? "No." I said. I don't know why I lied. I was nervous and scared and confused.
"That's kind of sad. I would have liked to take it from you." My body became stiff. "Can I ask you something?" He nodded and explored my body with his eyes. Then his eyes looked back into mine. "Where am I?" He let out a small laugh. "It's better if you didn't know."
"Why am I here?" He smiled. "My son knows you. I've seen you around his school and the moment I saw you........"
"You're fucking sick." I whispered. That wasn't suppose to come out. "What did you say to me?" I shook my head. "Nothing." I said. He placed his hands on my knees and spread my legs slightly. He positioned himself in between them and stared into my eyes. His face was a millimeter from mine. He breathed deeply. "I want to kiss you." He whispered.
"Well don't." I said. he chuckled and placed his lips against mine any way. I placed my hands on his shoulders and tried to push him away. I was suddenly all the way on the bed and he was holding my hands down onto the bed. He began to growl and moan as he kissed me. I shut my eyes tight. I prayed it would be over soon. But my prayer was soon shot to hell as I felt my jeans unbutton.
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Nice one, start was quite predictable. I would like to read more and if you can check out my novel, "slut forever" it has kind of same story like this, hope you will like it and don't forget to keep me update about it.
Write short chapter like you just did.
Anonymous
Interesting. I love her name, it's really pretty ^_^ I thought you did a good job with the first chapter.
I can't wait for the second. KMU? XOXO
OMG LOVED IT! Nice start! KMU please with a cherry on top!
kmu!! really good!
Anonymous
Wow, that was very, very interesting and very good. You put so much detail into it which made me want to read on. Please keep me updated and let me know when the next chapter comes out. :) Great work!
Anonymous
Excellent start, to what I hope will be a steamy novel! Like the way you just let things build toward the end. You handle eroticism very well in your writing, and I'm definitely interested to see where you go with this! KMU, would you, please?
Firstly, I love the picture used for this. A little irrelevant, but she's just beautiful. haha
I like the backstory you added about her dad and stepmother. It gives more to the story.
Jeez the stepmother sounds like a territorial bitch. I would've left too! (well, not if I knew what was going to happen to me)
Strange that everything is expensive looking in the bedroom. I figured it would've been really crappy looking in there. It has me interested and wondering about who these guys really are and what their purpose is in kidnapping this girl if they're rich and can get anything they want!
I like how she attempts to keep her dignity when he tells her to sit down. I would've been a groveling puddle by that point.
Great work! Very supsenseful and original. We really need some of that here on booksie.
Off to the next chapter!
Damn that was a really good start.
Grl, you know how to hook a person!! That was a great start to the story. Cant wait to see what it holds
Great start. I have read your novels as a guest here so wasn't able to comment. I wanted to start reading your work from tbe beginning instead of reading your recent work. I don't know why though. I always read your stories but have lost the record of your new work.
Oh well. I like it. Should I? Hmmm confusing feelings.
Interesting..I think I have read it long ago as a guest but I dont remember much ,lets go for another ride .
Oh god, I'm very ashamed of this story. I wrote it when I was very young and I deeply regret it. It's sloppy, there's no character development, nothing really makes much sense in this book. I want to take it down, honestly. All of my oldest work I'm ashamed of.
Hey c'mon dont be ashamed of it ! Its a memory of yours like when you might have been at that time sitting and the idea popped in your mind and you wrote it down with so much of enthusiasm ! I can relate to it..it must have been the beginning steps but you dare not remove your old world!! please , there is still the hard work put in it by your younger self ..
Well ending a chapter that way is a mean way to make one need to read more but it worked.
I'm liking this.SWx
Why did you have to torture me by reading this awful story?! Lol, JK. I mean yes I hate this story but its cool that you're reading it though im cringing. Not very proud of this. I was fifteen or sixteen when I wrote it so don't expect any great writing. But if you like it, I guess I did something right. Thank you for giving it a try.
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