The huntress
Poem by: Hobby
We frolicked and tangled our bodies as we lay,
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Very nice rhyme here, H, and what a story told! Love the hunter becoming the hunted... :)
This is a very exciting expose of your endearing experiences... Thanks for opening of your life, your fun, & your mind to the joy within it's dowry of experiences!
Thanks guys :) appreciate it, glad u liked
Hobby,
I like poetry that tells a story like this, and 'confessional' at that...
The surprise element at the end (being hunted, being used); it could all be metaphorical of course but it leaves me to wonder. You did well with your rhyme. It's erotic and intense. I really like it.
Thanks for popping in and commenting gone girl, I really appreciate your views and opinions, I'm glad you enjoyed it, I think sometimes we can all feel a little used like this, however it sometimes can be an advantage depending on where you stand :) thanks again
she staked her claim. my favorite line here was the simplest of terms but I loved it anyway :
"Positions of ecstasy performed, forcing me down on bended knee".
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Why thank you my dear :) I'm glad you enjoyed this one I appreciate the comment
"The pleasure grew harder as the candle lights grew softer"This line is my favourite
It creates something sweet and lovely
This is great Hobby!
Amy F. Turner