We frolicked and tangled our bodies as we lay,
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This is a very exciting expose of your endearing experiences... Thanks for opening of your life, your fun, & your mind to the joy within it's dowry of experiences!
Thanks guys :) appreciate it, glad u liked
Hobby,
I like poetry that tells a story like this, and 'confessional' at that...
The surprise element at the end (being hunted, being used); it could all be metaphorical of course but it leaves me to wonder. You did well with your rhyme. It's erotic and intense. I really like it.
Thanks for popping in and commenting gone girl, I really appreciate your views and opinions, I'm glad you enjoyed it, I think sometimes we can all feel a little used like this, however it sometimes can be an advantage depending on where you stand :) thanks again
she staked her claim. my favorite line here was the simplest of terms but I loved it anyway :
"Positions of ecstasy performed, forcing me down on bended knee".
"The pleasure grew harder as the candle lights grew softer"This line is my favourite
It creates something sweet and lovely
This is great Hobby!
Amy F. Turner