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Poem by: Hazel P.
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Hot skin
Cold Wall
No concept of time
Muscles tense
Brain is liquid
Breathing hard
Fingers on skin
Buttons
Zippers
Lips
Frenzied
Neck
Ear
Breathe
Eyes closed
Stop thinking
Just feel
Please me
Hot
“Oh God…”
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Breathe
Skin
Lips
Hot Skin
Hands
Sweat
Mouth open
Eyes closed
Block out reality
Warm
Wet
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Please don’t stop
“OH SHIT!”
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Blinking
Exhale
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Great poem I loved it and the build up was intense nicely written!
"Descriptors" is right. It's unique and smart. You have an understanding of the images and emotions that are attached to specific words, particularly in the erotic sense. To me, it's analogous to impressionist art, the way the words draw a picture...brief strokes somewhat open to interpretation, yet clearly confined to a specific subject. Sharp. Different. Nicely done...
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