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"I think you're a very accomplished writer by virtue of this offering. It's very sexy and well described.
As an entry, I'm thinking it would be good to expound upon the scene, even if the addition isn't in the book. I'm assuming this is a chapter?"
The hot water washed the sweat off Dave’s magnificent body. He had just finished another tough workout with Diane. Life was good, he thought. How many men had a hot wealthy blonde doing their backs in a shower? Not many, he decided but this hot wealthy blonde was doing his back. Dave had just heard Diane say, “I’m done, muscleman” when he saw an arm go across his upper torso and felt a hand grab his crotch. “Resistance is futile, muscleman,” she declared as she squeezed it. Diane nuzzled and kissed his neck and sank her teeth in his ear lobe. Her hand fondled his penis as she purred in his ear, “I’m going to make you big and hard.” As his penis grew rigid, she purred, “That’s it. You’re big and hard. Just the way I like it. And you like being big and hard, don’t you, darling?”
He smiled. “You know I do, honey.”
Her hand stopped fondling his penis and gripped it tightly. It moved back and forth rapidly. In a moment, Dave ejaculated.
He shut off the water and faced Diane. “That was a pleasant surprise.”
“It was a spur of the moment thing. There I was doing your beautiful back and I thought I’d give you a little treat. Keeps things interesting, you know.”
“It certainly does. And now, my beautiful golden-haired goddess, I need to thank you properly.”
They shared a long kiss. After the kiss, Dave said, “Let’s finish our shower.”
As Dave stood under the spray, he thought, Yes, indeed. Life was good.
Submitted: December 11, 2016
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Comments
That was a nice morning treat. Dave and Diane sure are the perfect couple. I liked this short to the point story. Great job.
Tue, December 27th, 2016 7:39pmI think you're a very accomplished writer by virtue of this offering. It's very sexy and well described.
As an entry, I'm thinking it would be good to expound upon the scene, even if the addition isn't in the book. I'm assuming this is a chapter?
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Very nice thought!
Sun, December 11th, 2016 9:14am