Her First Time

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Adult Romance  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Amanda remembers her first time with a woman


The water cascaded down from the shower like the warm summer rain storm she had been caught in when she had meet her latest lover. She closed her eyes and pictured it in her mind. Rushing through the park, her clothes drenched and clinging to her firm figure. Her eyes had fallen on the girl slowly dancing in the rain by the fountain so young and free.

She had stopped and watched the girl forgetting about the rain and the meeting she was late for. The girl was dressed in leather and lace her her long blond locks falling to below her waist they would fly about her face as she spun. The girl had come to a stop facing her and Amanda had felt a moment of embarrassment before the girl had smiled at her.

She had turned to continue on her way, but felt a hand fall on her shoulder, pulling her back around into a kiss. She could still feel the softness of the girl’s lips and taste her strawberry lip gloss. The kiss had lasted but a moment but the fire had been lit in her and Amanda reached out taking the girl’s hand.

The water began to turn cold and Amanda was pulled from her memory to turn it off. Stepping out of the shower the cool evening air coming in the partially open bathroom window made her flesh form goosebumps and she remember that feeling as the girl had slowly undressed her in her small apartment. She closed her eyes and could remember the musty smell slipping into the apartment from the hallway. The feel of the girl’s fingers sliding over her flesh had caused a shiver to run down her spine.

Picking up a thick soft towel she remember how the towel the girl had used to dry her off with had the aroma of the girl’s perfume on it. The way the girl had slipped to her knees to run the soft thick cloth down her legs had been so sensual. The whole process only took a few minutes but it was like a seduction that lasted for hours.

Dropping the towel Amanda walked to her bedroom looking at the ruffled bed and smiled, but turned away to the desk in the corner. It took but a moment to turn on her computer and bring up her word processing program. The cool soft leather of her chair conforming her back and buttocks made Amanda remember the softness of the girl’s touch as she drew her to the small bed in the corner of her one room apartment. The feel of this girl’s lips on her flesh so soft and gentle unlike a man’s.

Slowly they had explored each others bodies. She could taste the supple flesh of this young woman as she began to write. Her fingers ran across the hard keys of the keyboards as she recalled how the girl’s flesh had been so soft and warm to the touch.

She could still feel how the girl wiggle against her as she kissed her way down her body. She had never done it before, but she pressed her face between the girl’s thighs inhaling her scent before kissed her. She licked her lips as the memory of tasting another woman for the first time flooded her mind.

The flavor had driven her wild with desire and she slipped her tongue into this beautiful creature as her lover gasped in pleasure. The taste and sensation was so strange and but felt so natural as she slid her fingers around the girls hips to grab her firm ass and pull them closer. The girl’s moans still echoed in her head as she remember how this beauty had thrust her hips up as her pleasure built.

She could feel the dampness between her thighs grow as she relived that moment in her mind and wrote it on the screen. She wanted to stop but she felt a need almost as strong as the one that had made her driven her when she was in bed with the girl to finish the story. She typed faster as the memory of what came next flooded her mind.

A soft cough pulled her from that memory and she spun her chair around. Anna sat up in the bed smiling.

“I have to go soon and I was kind of hoping you would come cuddle with me until then.”

Amanda smiled as she saved the document and hurried to cuddle Anna the girl from the park.



Submitted: February 11, 2021

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Ivy B Pane

Wonderful, first times should always be the best. Love your work, I can feel the warmth all the way through.
All my Love
Ivy

Fri, July 23rd, 2021 3:16am

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I am so happy you like my work.

Sun, July 25th, 2021 2:55am

Spyguy

Softness & love, how could one ask for more?

Tue, January 18th, 2022 8:08am

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Thank you for reading.

Sun, January 23rd, 2022 5:08pm

DampKitten

You are a good writer. This is sensual and affectionate. I've suggested a few changes.

If you re-read this piece, note how often you say "the girl". It gets a bit redundant and you might want to alter your language in some areas to smooth it out. Also, dialogue might add to this piece. There's none until the very end.

It's your intention to reveal the beautiful stranger's name at the end for the purpose of emphasizing her presence in the room - something your reader may not be expecting. I like the technique.

What I particularly enjoy is the analogy technique that you use from the beginning, one thing being reminiscent of another - rain to shower, the towel experiences, a finger's touch compared to the soft leather chair. You join past to present and meld everything together in the end.

Sat, January 22nd, 2022 10:21pm

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I did use the girl a lot. I will have rewrite it and change that. As you noted I kept the name of the girl a surprise to the end and that made it kind of hard.

I was actually trying to use no dialogue at all. A fellow writer made that comment that a good story has to have dialogue and I thought I could write one without any. Guess I failed, but not too bad.

Thank you for reading and comment DampKitten it is always a pleasure to hear from you.

Sun, January 23rd, 2022 5:14pm

DampKitten

Assign her a 'pet' name based on some physical characteristic that stands out when you meet. It will endear the reader to her and make the character easier to reference as your story continues.

Mon, January 24th, 2022 2:01am

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