2nd place isn't winning

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group


I smile rays of sunshine at you.. I laugh but inside I'm hurting so bad. I look at your face, I hear your laughter, but it makes me imagine the next girl doing it, feeling like we won't get our happily ever after... I hear your promises, and your I love you's... I know that you will love someone else the way that I love you... I think about our kisses and the way you touch me there. I want you to express to me that you truly care. One day youre going to let go of me so easily, that one day you'll just forget bout me.. My heart is being ripped apart, my throat closing up my eyes closing shut.. I'm hurting. Second place still doesn't win and I thought I loved you, but now im not even sure what love is...


Submitted: September 05, 2020

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MYSTICARAYNE

Such raw emotion, I absolutely love this.

Sat, September 5th, 2020 5:15am

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Thankkk you hun!!

Fri, September 4th, 2020 10:17pm

DampKitten

That's good, girl!
The font doesn't bother me at all.
I would love it to be in poetic format (I think that's what you meant)
The content is great...intense

Sat, September 5th, 2020 5:42am

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What how I normally space everything so don't look close together. Thank you

Fri, September 4th, 2020 10:51pm

DampKitten

Format (structure)

I smile rays of sunshine at you..
I laugh, but inside I'm
hurting so bad. I look
at your face; I hear
your laughter, but it makes
me imagine the next girl
doing it, feeling like we won't
get our happily ever after... I hear your
promises and your "I love you's"... I know
that you will love someone else
the way that I love you... I think
about our kisses and the way
you touch me there.
I want you to express to me
that you truly care.
One day you're going to let go
of me so easily.
That one day
you'll just forget bout me..
My heart is being ripped apart.
My throat closing up, my eyes
closing shut.. I'm hurting.
Second place still
doesn't win
and I thought
I loved you,
but now
I'm not even sure
what love is...

Sat, September 5th, 2020 4:51pm

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