Poetry lesson

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: General Erotica  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group


Just having a little fun with a poem,

any feedback would be appreciated, thanks 

 

My skin itches and vibrates to be welcomed and held next to you,

 

To be aroused,

To be doused, in your flames that lick

To be lathered in every tongue flick.

 

To be the man you arch for,

To be the man you ache for,

To be the one, your final gasp,

Your quiver, your shutter, your spell cast.

 

 

 

 


Submitted: July 21, 2020

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Amy F. Turner

Like where this is going. I was drawn in and awaited more feeling like it was unfinished. It was very passionate and liked it well.

Tue, July 21st, 2020 6:37am

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Thanks, I wasn’t sure where to go next so just thought to play it safe and end it there.

Mon, July 27th, 2020 9:44pm

DampKitten

Sometimes poems can actually be amazingly brief.
I think this works perfectly, whispered into her ear by the fire...releasing the buttons

Sat, July 25th, 2020 2:43am

Author
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Thanks, just having a play with some words, not sure where it was going, prob should have a plan next time.

Mon, July 27th, 2020 9:46pm

VanillaEssence

These lines will be sure to please.
I liked it

Wed, July 29th, 2020 8:59am

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Thanks, I’m glad you liked it.

Wed, July 29th, 2020 6:59pm

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