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I agree with Aly.
Wed, April 8th, 2015 8:28pm
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Thank you! :)
Wed, April 8th, 2015 7:04pm
Aly, said exactly what I was thinking. Nothing like getting over heart break. Good job!
Fri, April 10th, 2015 12:40pm
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Thank you! I appreciate a lot your positive feedback. :)
Fri, April 10th, 2015 5:45am
This makes perfect sense. Thank you for that.
Sun, April 12th, 2015 6:40am
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THANKS a lot DLCannon! :) Your positive feedback makes sense. :)
Sat, April 11th, 2015 11:47pm
I like this one, I think its my favorite, personally. Of course a lot of people have experienced this but this does hit home, especially when you really care and love someone so much. It hurts, but time eventually wont necessarily HEAL all wounds, but it can help.
Mon, April 20th, 2015 10:59pm
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Wow! I'm glad you liked it and came out as your favorite, Marquesha! :-)
Mon, April 20th, 2015 5:09pm
Short, simple, unfussy. Well done.
Sun, May 3rd, 2015 10:12am
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Thank you! :-)
Sun, May 3rd, 2015 7:08am
I liked this, You can't be replaced only substituted and a substitute usually is not as good a s the real thing so don't feel bad, it's their loss. Very sad to feel betrayed by a close friend but if they can drop you like that they were never really your friend to begin with.
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Alyson Williams
Very simple but heart wrenching. Beautiful!
Tue, April 7th, 2015 1:27pmAuthor
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I appreciate a lot how you see my work Alyson. Thank you! I'll be posting more poems. Keep in touch. :)
Tue, April 7th, 2015 6:46am