Getting better. Part 2

Getting better. Part 2 Getting better. Part 2

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Genre: Fantasy

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Status: Finished

Genre: Fantasy

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I like this part and am loving writing it. Please enjoy and try to see yourself in it if you can. X

Summary

I like this part and am loving writing it. Please enjoy and try to see yourself in it if you can. X

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Submitted: June 23, 2013

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Submitted: June 23, 2013

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It's been 30 years now, you and bobby did still walk along the sand, both sitting, looking to see if i might appear but no. Bobby passed away a few years ago taken by a lorry, he lived till 22, only you and him knew why. At 65 you are very well, you feel like the night i kissed you, full of life and a love that has never left you. A few relationships but nothing solid. One morning and collecting the post an advert, a cruise ship, something about it makes you book it and a few weeks later your riding the high seas, the ship is beautiful, but you spend your time looking into the sea, watching, wanting even calling out. One night a storm, waves crashing, the ship moving it's quite bad. All of a sudden the alarms are off, the ship shudders, almost stops, it's hit something, an island a liitle away Its jagged rocks has torn a hole, it starts to lean, people running, crying theres panic all around, but not you. Calmly you walk to the deck, life boats and jackets, swimmers you need to get off. Jumping into the cold water in your underwear, everybody needs to get away before the ship takes them and you down. The boats are fine but the swimmers are struggling, your floating, watching you can't help, you start to cry, women, children and men exhausted trying to get to the island, the only light is a path that the moon has layed through the rain. Suddenly you can't believe what you see, all the swimmers, it's like their being lifted, taken, all of them to the sands of the island, pushed ashore and in safety. You start to think about me, could it be and yes it is, you see tails, lots of them. You start to swim yourself but stop, a head, then a body in front of you, it's me to come to save you but no, i hold your hips as i did all those years ago, smile and say, ' my darling, i said we would meet again and we have, all your dreams and hopes i am here '. We kiss you hold me never wanting to let me go again.' You have a choice, you can go to the island or you can come with me, i can show you so many beautiful things never seen, a life you have never had and all your dreams will come true ', i say. Without another thought you nod, say yes but say, ' how can i?, i am old, my body and face, i am not the same! '. ' look into the water, see yourself '. You do and you are as young as when we first met. As we kiss we turn, getting lower and lower we disapear. A few weeks have passed, i no alot of you will remember this, the ship that hit rocks?, everybody survied?, it was all over the papers and tv, how could it of happened, storys of being saved, some said aliens, but no one really no's, one person is still missing and thats all. When they broke into your house to clear it again it couln't be explained. On every wall a painting, mermaids and mermen, fishes never seen, a place so beautiful some say could be heaven. They never cleared the house but opened it up, people from far off places come to see it, they come to see your dreams, your fantasys. X


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