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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Adult Romance  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group



there is this raw wound I feel

that of my feelings

even the slightest of care

every sweet word

seems genuine

so true

it makes me cry

my tears come rushing through

Idk why

but I am afraid to confess

and afraid to complain

I just am saying

Oh dear Lord

please am not complaining

But I want to confess

Yes, I feel I think

I crave care

and I hate me


for that

I dont want the want

tobe loved

But I cant stop wanting


or often

Am pathetic

but yes

thats me

Submitted: March 14, 2020

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Amy F. Turner

Not pathetic at all to express what it is you feel that is valid and nothing to be ashamed of as I believe we all come to a place where we feel such things. We just don't stay there as we are ever searching for and appreciating never taking for grant those happy times of our lives that are bound to come in time.

Sun, March 15th, 2020 4:24am


yea :-)
Thank you Amy :)

Sun, March 15th, 2020 6:40am


Everyone wants that, girl. There's nothing wrong with it.
We all have our wounds as well. The places we need to be kissed

Tue, March 17th, 2020 4:21am


Hugs you

Wed, March 18th, 2020 8:10am

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