Lost Lust

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Adult Romance  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Your words entice me, dear man.
They arouse me. They entertain me.
I hope my words can come close to yours.
They are all for you, my dear.

You’re an immaculate angel who enjoys seducing his lovers.
Your wings wrap around me tightly to protect me.
They keep me warm in the winter’s chill.
I long to be held in your arms and seduced into becoming one with you.

I enjoy your company, your words, your seduction.
You arouse me to dripping wet.
I want you inside me.
I desire your virility urgently.

Please make haste and come to me tonight.
I long to be lavishly and lustfully taken.
I want to be caressed by your strength and gentle demeanor.
You and I will virtually come together across the miles to become one climax.

I want you right now!
My vagina is aching for you.
I will take all of your rock hard penis inside me.
I surrender my desires to you.

Enjoy my wet lusty vestibule.
Thrust yourself deeply inside as you cum. 
As I arch my back and gyrate my voluptuous hips I take all of your powerful rigid penis inside me. Oh it feels so damn good! Don’t stop!

Continue to thrust into my vagina and don’t withdraw until I give you permission. You’re now my prisoner. As my fingertips grasp your shaved head, I caress your tongue with my tongue. I rock us together back and forth as we rabidly finish climaxing, soon to fall passionately asleep in each other’s arms. I will await your arrival tonight as darkness falls.

Submitted: February 16, 2021

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Young love is all of these things.
Either way I doubt that he can resist such a "hot and wet" challenge.
Loved this poem.

Tue, February 16th, 2021 3:24am


Thank you for reading my muses.

Tue, February 16th, 2021 4:21am


This is a poetic love letter. You have someone in particular in mind for this because you are quite specific about certain physical features that otherwise would not be mentioned. I love your pieces. They are filled with passion and energy. I think you like to emulate a certain old world charm and demeanor.

The one suggestion I have (because you clearly understand metaphor based on my reading) is that you use metaphorical terms as a substitute for vagina and penis, words we rarely see in erotic poetry.

Poets often establish a backdrop to their piece (a kind of staging if you will) that allows for metaphorical analogy which underscores the theme. For example, if your backdrop is the sea or a ship, you might use an oar as a symbol for penis. You might mention the rising tide as a reference for feminine excitement. See what I'm saying? To do that is to add to the poetic flavor.

If this is your first attempt at writing, color me impressed. Free verse is more typical of contemporary poetry. I always recommend reading from some of the masters to help tone your skills and give you ideas.

Wed, February 17th, 2021 12:42am


Thank you for your recommendations. Appreciate your insight for sure.

Wed, February 17th, 2021 1:21am

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