Color Me With Your Passion

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: General Erotica  |  House: Red Light Wives


When your pencil writes the words and you color them with your passion, you will please me and I will please you, too. We will follow your words of instruction to achieve the pinnacle of ecstasy. As I float euphorically I will gladly mirror your gratification with the words you’ve written for us. 

Your words have me falling for you.
I fall for what seems like an eternity.
Suddenly something securely catches me.
It’s you.
I’ve longed for you.

I know I’ve known you.
I’ve sensed your soul within my soul.
We will enjoy each other’s words. 
We will live together with our sensuous words of erotica passed back and forth in a rhythmic rotation between here and now, between then and there. 

Let’s meet virtually. Let’s arouse ourselves with words. Let’s meet again soon.
Please continue to feed my rhythmic vibration with your erotic words so I become wet as the river that meets the sea. Hurry now.


Submitted: February 21, 2021

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DampKitten

I think this is the latter part of what was a single piece, now standing on its own as a second piece. It seems to address an author or perhaps a virtual lover communicating by letter or verse. This, like the sister poem, is second person narrative. Unlike the other piece, it addresses someone using the pencil rather than the pencil itself.

There's a subtle metaphorical analogy to sex - "words of erotica passed back and forth in a rhythmic rotation". I like how you do that. It's literary inference.

Mon, February 22nd, 2021 12:24am

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Yes, it is the sister to the other poem.

Sun, February 21st, 2021 4:58pm

DampKitten

I don't have any critique of this...just observation

Mon, February 22nd, 2021 1:55am

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Okay, thanks!

Sun, February 21st, 2021 6:54pm

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