Your Never Ending Rejection

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

taken from my book, "Our Founded Feelings"

Your Never Ending Rejection


It doesn't bug me that you don't want my dick

But what makes me sick

__is how you reject it before even seeing it

Before even riding it

Before even sucking it

And by golly

__you're just such a bitch

That I can't stand your rejection

__of my own beating heart

The love I shower you with just gets turned down

And I cannot stand it

As you bend over right in front of me

To pick up a quarter off of the ground

Letting me see your ass

Just stickin' out in thee air

Up so high

__that I wanna just ram it

But cannot

Because I cannot have it

Well, fuck you!

I really hope the next time I see you

__that I find you dead!

Then I'll have my way!

Fuckin' bitch!

I really hope that the next guy you reject

__goes and takes your pitiful life

So I can have his sloppy seconds

__and fuck you right in your dead mind!

You can't be mine?

That's O.K.

I'll fuck you when you die

And I'll have a good time

But let me make myself clear

"I will be the one

__to have a good time

You will be dead"

Do you understand me, you furkin' whore?


05-21-'21 #2

D. L. Cannon

Submitted: May 28, 2021

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I can't get over your anger issues, DL. If I found this piece lying on the floor in the library I'd be very afraid.

That being said, I find your use of rhyme interesting and clever. You are a clever murderer.

Fri, May 28th, 2021 3:38pm


I'm not a murderer. Don't be afraid.

Mon, May 31st, 2021 9:59am


This is a classic case of the tortoise and the hare DLC.
You have always been a clever and entertaining writer.
Now that all those exciting writers of the past ten years have "pulled the plug".
You,yes you, I think anyway, have now become the "IT" writer on silk.
I loved this scary and never a word wasted poem.

Sat, May 29th, 2021 1:54am


Wow! Really?! That's great news! Thanks! :)

Mon, May 31st, 2021 10:00am


Whew! That's a relief!

Mon, May 31st, 2021 11:19pm



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