Two Minute Poem

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Poem that took me two minutes to write down the thoughts floating around in my mind

I open my eyes and see your face

Smiling over me as I begin to shake

Quiver after quiver the waves come quick

An explosion of pleasure

A gasp leaves my mouth

A warm tongue flits about

Down my neck, my chest, and deep into the wet.

Submitted: August 02, 2014

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I love the sensuously provocative use of a talented tongue...

Sat, August 2nd, 2014 8:21pm

Good Work, that can be the best way sometimes, no thinking deep, just write it out.

Sat, July 18th, 2015 10:48am

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Thank you so much :) as you know I'm a fan of your poems.

Sun, July 19th, 2015 12:12pm

Wonderful poem! Excellent job describing and orgasm in a very artistic way.

Sun, July 19th, 2015 6:48pm

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Thank you. It's so nice to get lovely feedback.

Sun, July 19th, 2015 12:11pm

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