Surrender

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Have you ever experienced anything else quite like it?

Have you ever felt anything else quite like it,

A magical moment that sends us into a blissful fit,

A whirlwind of feelings whisk us away to another place,

Leaving us relaxed, a big smile upon our face.



In those few seconds how we feel so much,

A rush brought on by kisses and sensual touch,

A tsunami of endorphins flood our very core,

Breathing becomes heavy, king of the jungle ready to roar.



In a moment we become lost,

Worries, fears, pains and heartaches tossed,

Brains tingle and dance in glorious delight,

Like a bird so free, our whole being takes flight.



Eyes roll back, oh euphoria caress me so

Let us surrender our soul and go with the flow,

Let our minds become lost in this place of dreams,

A brief escape from reality it seems.

 

Floating upon fluffy white clouds,

No distractions and no-one around,

Indugle in this moment so sacred,

Fireworks in the mind, souls elated!

 

Give ourselves to the Gods we do,

Wolves howl longingly at the milky white moon,

Vulnerable and naked we do bare all,

Transcend this world, the story of our rise and fall.

 

And then like Icarus the great,

We fall from that world we temporarily create,

Back to reality our feet firmly placed,

Eager to savour once again, that forbidden fruit's taste. 

 

Oh the joys and happiness it does bring,

The soul given a set of wings,

Fly away to a place our minds create,

A world so full of magic, so epic and so great. 


Submitted: March 11, 2021

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DampKitten

That’s really good, DH! Tsunami of endorphins...what a great description.
If you hadn’t of tagged masturbation in the description, I would have sworn you were talking about eating chocolate...

Sat, March 13th, 2021 5:07am

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As always DK, your words are like golden doubloons... Priceless! I'm glad you liked that description. I know I had already written a masturbation poem when I first started on this site, but that was more about the things one can use to aid in satisfying this need, the actions etc. This time I wanted to try and focus purely on the actual feelings and to see them as almost spiritual in a sense, and how the orgasm isn't just something that is the result of physical stimulation, but something that is much more than that. An experience that elevates our minds to another plain almost, another world even for just those few heavenly seconds. Hehe! Well I mean who can resist a bit of chocolatey temptation! ;) Thanks again for reading oh great one!

Sat, March 13th, 2021 5:45am

Amy F. Turner

It is such a thrill eating chocolate and LOL, reading this lovely poem of your, D! Thanks so much for sharing it. Very well done, enjoying your ebbs and flows of delightful prose. :)

Sat, March 13th, 2021 8:29am

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LOL! It certainly is Amy! ;p Always a pleasure, and thank you for taking the time to have a read of it. It means a lot knowing people enjoy these poems. :) To thee I bow my head in appreciation, oh glorious one!

Sat, March 13th, 2021 6:04am

DampKitten

I think you accomplished that!

Sun, March 14th, 2021 2:10pm

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Why thank you kindly, I'm honoured you think so! :D

Sun, March 14th, 2021 7:18am

kalelthemith

As DK says, yes i get similar feeling from chocolate, but more so from self pleasuring when the time arises.

Sat, June 12th, 2021 10:38am

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Hehe oh yes chocolate is certainly a good one when it comes to those feelings. But there is something quite special, about the feelings from pleasuring the self. That explosion of epic euphoria is just... incredible!

Sat, June 12th, 2021 8:37am

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