When You Return

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: General Erotica  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Featured Review on this writing by Extinct

Metaphorical analysis of a wandering lover

Leave me, then
 
dry
 as december leaves
 
cold
as january snow
 
leave me
and go
 
 
 
seek yourself
in
  summer happiness
 
basque
in
her yellow ray
blue eyed 
tempest
 
her
proud peaks
her
fragrant valleys
 
 
 
basque
and believe
in forever
sun
 
but what when
 summer 
comes
undone?
 
october reds
its warning
 
orange yellows 
spiral down
 
the wet is
cold
and uninviting
 
winter
makes a
mourning sound
 
 
 
and what when
you return?
 
arms empty
as
meadow wind
 
your lips
a benediction
 
who will let
you in?
 
 
get on your
knees
 
plant your face
in spring
 
my sprigs of 
happy rest
 
my crescent
waters
 
 
 
plant
and eat
 
I'm ripe
for you
below
 
my supple bounty 
seeps
my river ebbs
 
kneel and taste me slow
 
 
 
this shallow season
moans
the sweetest song
 
 
plowed and seeded
deep
while you were gone
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


Submitted: June 28, 2020

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Storywriterx

I'll never go away, not even for a day you
You are my kitten, with you am smitten
I'll lick your fur, until I hear you purr
You have captured my heart, so we'll never part
XoxoX Ron/SWxx

Sun, June 28th, 2020 2:28am

Author
Reply

Now that is purr worthy sweetness, Ron
You know how to pull my chain after all don't you?

Sun, June 28th, 2020 12:23pm

Writing_wall44

I really love this, personification of the seasons is beautifully done.

Sun, June 28th, 2020 3:03am

Author
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Thank you, girl!

Sat, June 27th, 2020 9:35pm

Dick Wood

Very good description of the changes in the season. I would prefer spring all year round.

Sun, June 28th, 2020 5:46am

Author
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Me too
A bitter winter makes the spring sweeter
Thanks for reading, Dick!

Sun, June 28th, 2020 12:20pm

Sarah C

I really love this! The description of seasons are beautiful.
Another great poem, Meg.

Sun, June 28th, 2020 8:22am

Author
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Thanks so much, Sarah
Thanks for reading!

Sun, June 28th, 2020 12:18pm

Extinct

Wow! Its amazing! I just love it these metaphors are yum!

Sun, June 28th, 2020 12:25pm

Author
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Thank you, girl. Thanks for reading and telling me...

Sun, June 28th, 2020 12:18pm

benawriter

Although I'd gladly kneel and drink, if this hints at what I expect that it does, I'd probably wait for another time...when you haven't been plowed and seeded!

Love the cover - you knew I would.

Sun, June 28th, 2020 8:21pm

Author
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I thought of you when I picked it out.
This absolutely hints at what you expected.

Thanks for reading, Ben!

Sun, June 28th, 2020 9:10pm

Amy F. Turner

Oh one does live how the seasons flow off the tongue holding prisoner none. Mmm mmm what a groove you set for all pleasures me. Sexy personification has got the guys drooling and the girls moaning for like treatment. One would expect nothing less poetress.

Sun, June 28th, 2020 9:25pm

Author
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Thank you, Amy! I'm a big fan of moaning...sometimes drooling. I love holding prisoners as long as they are my prisoners.

Thanks for reading. I love your comment!

Sun, June 28th, 2020 9:13pm

DLCannon

I love this one. So much more monogamist But I can't relate to the weather preferences. I hate sunlight, spring, and summer. I also wanna eat pussy as fast as I can! Don't wanna tease my taste buds.

Sun, July 5th, 2020 8:23pm

Author
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You've got to slow it down, DL! Eating pussy is NOT about your taste buds.
Thanks for reading my poem. I'm glad you like it. It's not really about the weather, though.

Sun, July 5th, 2020 9:22pm

DLCannon

Well, I can't help it if it tastes good! I'm an addict! "'Member?!"....."Oh! I 'member!".....Yeah, I 'member!"....."'Member?!"....."Yeah! 'Member!?"

Mon, July 20th, 2020 6:42am

Author
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I do remember, baby

Mon, July 20th, 2020 12:22pm

Spyguy

If you were my baby, there would be no maybe
In your Spring I’d be buzzing
Your dew-drops Glug-guzzlin’
As Summer’s came on you; My love still would be new
Exploding your Autumn
Enthralled by your bottom
Your silver-haired Winter; Enthusiastically enter!!!

Yes, I am a keeper, I can’t be a creeper...
My song is forever, I’d not leave you ever!!!
But you’d take my passion
Not leave me for fashion???
I DO beg your pardon; The flowers of your garden...
Pollinate like a bee, yes, that would be me!!!

Mon, August 17th, 2020 9:41am

Author
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As always, my beautiful merman, you sweep me off my feet!
Are you my 'forever' man for every season?
You make every day a summer

Thu, August 20th, 2020 6:26pm

DLCannon

Classy sex scene. Not profanic, at all. You always have a way of sounding so sexual, without all the obscene words to describe sex. So delicate, and pure. Always you.

Thu, November 25th, 2021 8:00pm

Author
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Thank you, DL. I occasionally let loose in some of my stories but I do use metaphor a lot in poems for sensuality. I'm glad you like this and thanks for reading!

Thu, November 25th, 2021 4:08pm

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